Reviews for Dawn!
| Vamp_Grlz |
12/28/04 - 04:30PM |
18: Part 18 |
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| Hey! This frenchtoast101. I hope someoen contributes to my part...*tear* |
| Tomi Angel |
11/07/04 - 01:26AM |
18: Part 18 |
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| ahhh!!! suspenceful!!!
uh-oh what is dawn gonna say?
what the heck is gonna happen!?
sum1 plz contribute!!!
(if i do, i'll probably mess the whole thing up) |
| Angel15 |
11/05/04 - 05:15PM |
1: Dawn! |
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| Wow,cool story!
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| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:48AM |
16: Chapter 16 |
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| huuuuuuuuh!!!!!!!!!! omg wat's gonna happen??? |
| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:45AM |
12: Chapter 12 |
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| ahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
every1 thinks that andrew is gay!!!
mehehehe ahhh u guys r so funny!!! |
| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:43AM |
11: Chapter 11 |
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| ahahaha!!! xander clothes!!! gd one |
| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:40AM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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| awww. poor andrew. T_T |
| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:39AM |
4: Chapter 4 |
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| oooh!!! all the excitement when he's gonna say it!!! |
| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:37AM |
1: Dawn! |
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ahhh cool. i luv poems. i've never seen one so far, but this is a rly gd one! great start of the story!!!
Author's Response: thnx
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| Monkey Pants |
10/30/04 - 05:56PM |
16: Chapter 16 |
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Wow, short. Is there more to this chapter?
Author's Response: I know it's short but I was gonna see if another writer wanted to do the final chapter cuz I'm not to good at them! but thnks for reading
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| memarkw |
10/30/04 - 05:10AM |
1: Dawn! |
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You write very well, especially for a 13 yer old. I would suggest a beta-reader for little things that spell check might not catch. If you keep it up the way you're going, you're going to be a fantastic writer! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very mucyh |
| Danielle_G |
10/14/04 - 08:15PM |
1: Dawn! |
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Hello! This story is a very very nice story! I like the idea of Andrew having feelings for Dawn. Can wait to read more!
Author's Response: thnk you
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| filmtheory |
10/12/04 - 06:28PM |
1: Dawn! |
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Nice poem. And I like the general idea for the story. Hope the other writers are as good as you.
Author's Response: Thnk you" |
| spikelover6661 |
10/12/04 - 05:43PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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*Shudder, gasp* ERRGGHHHHHH!!! You can't end it like that!!!! *sobs* You can't mistreat me so! I love it. I'm not a big Dandrew fan, but this is making me a huge one. YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT!!!! *clutches chest* Calming. Write more, or be prepared for the wrath of me!!! You have to write it. No one else can.
Author's Response: it's frenchtoatst's turn to write if you look at th authours then you'll see we've taken it time about!
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