Reviews for Running on Faith: Season One
| Quortoth |
01/23/06 - 04:28PM |
14: Episode 14: Traffic School and a Hefty Fine |
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I think you've got a really good talent for making up lines, "Little runt gets around," Surprise Party." Good ones, those are my favorite, and I think the nickname for Dawn, 'Glow Ball' is great.
Author's Response: Spike always had that dry, clever wit. I like palying that up. Thanks for the kind words. |
| Kevin |
11/14/04 - 04:55AM |
14: Episode 14: Traffic School and a Hefty Fine |
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How do you do it? How do you always up the stakes, up the tension, up the twists? Every time I think this story can’t get any better, it does. First off, Spike’s reaction to seeing Dru with Connor is priceless. Next, “brunette, brain-washing bitches” was hysterical, especially in context. Next great line: Faith’s “These two are ours. Those you kill.” Connor feels guilt over his fling with Buffy was cool. Angel thanking Spike was touching. But what was with Angel and the Shanshu? Does Angel know he’s the one who’ll shanshu? If so, how? Nice job remembering crazy people (e.g. Dana) see Dawn as a glowing ball of light. Finally, the Risen One. We finally get to the bottom of it. And WOW. You did not disappoint. In retrospect, the clues were all there. What other villain would face off against Connor and Spike, but not Faith? What other villain would have a bank account called “Municipal Fund”? And finally, what other villain would bribe people to HELP Faith? This was sheer brilliance once again. Oh, and great title.
Author's Response: Wow! thanks so much for this way way way too kind review. I'm glad you liked the story. I hope you'll keep enjoying it this much. Oh, and thank for mentioning the title. I thought it was kind of cute. |
| crayonbreaky gal |
10/10/04 - 04:44PM |
14: Episode 14: Traffic School and a Hefty Fine |
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Brunette, brain-washing bitches, Oh, you slut. Such great lines. I love it when a writer just lets it go and comes up with these. Also, for some reason, chapter 14 is cut off at the bottom. Why doesn't Angel just snap Eve's neck? I guess the evil you know, is better than the ones you don't.
Author's Response: Damn! The cool cliffhanger endiong is cut off! Well, that's fixed now. But sorry. Glad you liked the funny lines. |
| filmtheory |
10/03/04 - 09:46PM |
14: Episode 14: Traffic School and a Hefty Fine |
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Being an idiot, I accidentally erased this chapter and the review that was on it. Below is a review Angeldove posted for this chapter:
So…Dru and Eve, have to say I didn't see that coming. Then there is Faith and the Mayor, also an interesting twist to the plotline. I enjoyed getting more Angel/Connor, Angel/Spike interaction. I especially liked where the episode ended with Angel, as I look forward to seeing him confronted with the reality of the past he seems to be running from? Yes, that's me hinting for spoilers again.
Author's Response: This was my response to Angeldove's review: When you say you didn't see Dru and Eve coming, was that in a good way or a bad way? To satiate your lust for spoilers, I will tell you Angel will soon deal with the past from which he’s running. But not just yet.
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