Reviews for Sunlight
| maleficent |
01/29/05 - 02:31PM |
1: Faith and Wesley's POV |
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I love, love, LOVE this story. I'm a huge Fesley fan and I'm always thinking about things that could've happened between them in those three episodes.
Loved how you did it in both POV's.
Great story. Hope you keep writing.
Author's Response: Yay, you reviewed. I just reviewed your story too. Great job. I'm really into them right now. I've written other couples, it's just the two of them appeal to me at the moment. So much angst to write about! I love doing POV character studies. Makes me think about how a male and how a female would view a scene. |
| Revello1620 |
11/19/04 - 02:59AM |
1: Faith and Wesley's POV |
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I love the chemistry you created between Faith and Wes. It reminded me of Wes and Lilah's relationship, except that your story is better and Faith is way better at being bad than Lilah.
Author's Response: I don't know if Faith is better at being bad. Lilah sure is good at it. I really like both characters. Probably two of the best women ever created on the shows. But that's just my bias. And thanks for the compliment too. I like their chemistry too. It's all so subtext, that the viewers really had to watch closely. |
| filmtheory |
10/15/04 - 11:03AM |
1: Faith and Wesley's POV |
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Great story! I hope I don't go on and on too much. The first thing I want to say about this story is that I love the way you got Faith and Wes together. When writers want to couple two characters, they usually do one of two things. Usually, they just throw the two together like no set up is needed. Sometimes, they create some ridiculous, cliche-filled story that get the two to fall in love. You, on the other hand, took what could have just been a sex story and created an excellent character study in which much happened to bring these two together. However, it happened in their minds. While many stories focusing exclusively on thoughts are slow, you kept the story moving with the internal struggles of the characters. I also love that we got two POVs. Also, the love scenes were very, very sexy. I hope you post again soon.
Author's Response: You know, when I started writing this, it wasn't just to write a story about two people having sex. I was doing an exercise on POVs. Writing a guy's POV is totally different than writing a gal's POV. And it just happened this way. So thanks for the review. I love doing internal struggles also and this was fun to see how each would handle the situation. |
| wav |
10/10/04 - 12:18PM |
1: Faith and Wesley's POV |
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I followed you over here! Hope you don't mind. If you keep writing Faith, I'll be your new best friend.
Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. I'll be posting more here soon. |
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