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faith_slayer89 09/30/04 - 09:38PM 3: Chapter 3 Signed
The storyline's pretty good so far. I'm having trouble following the writing because everything's so compressed together. You might want to try making your paragraphs smaller and starting a new paragraph everytime someone speaks. The only problem I have with the storyline is the fact that everything is happening so easily for our heroes. I'm an angst girl, so I think there should be some conflict somewhere, especially with the whole Angel-Buffy-Spike triangle thing. And I find the fact that Angel is Giles' son ironic, since Angelus killed Ms Calendar and tortured Giles. But hey, it's your story, and to each his own.

Author's Response: I happen to be an Angel/Buffy purist. And I just like things to be esy for them now, considering that everything was so hard for them before. But, thank you for the review.






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