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inlovewithangel 09/27/04 - 10:44PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I'm interested by this story, and can't wait for you to continue it. Your writing and dialogue flows well, one thing about format though, is that it would be easier to read if you start a new paragraph each time a different character speaks. Just a suggestion. Great work, I'm so into this! R&R my work too!
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