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Michael J 09/22/04 - 11:47AM 1: War and Peace Signed
Weak. The script format itself doesn't read very well (trying writing the names of the characters in all caps everytime). You spelled "Lilah" as "layla." You spelled "reckon" wrong and there isn't a single character (especially Spike) that would speak like that. No explanation for Gunn being turned. Why are Buffy and Spike back in LA? Illyria says "trendy" now? Work on the dialogue. None of the characters seem to be true representations of what we've seen before. I did like the bit with the Immortal/Buffy and the dragon slaying. That was neat.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I've revised the script format which was actually some bug and fixed the spelling. Also, Illyria no longer says "Trendy".. Some explanation for Gunn being turned is given. More explanation on the next episode. Oh, and Buffy/Spike are not back in LA. What gave u that idea?






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