Reviews for The Darkness Within
| frenchtoast101 |
11/22/04 - 11:20AM |
20: Chapter Nineteen- When Bad News Comes A Knockin' |
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| OMG!!! You have to finish this! It's so awesome! =) |
| mamathehut |
11/17/04 - 09:32PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen- Blood Connections |
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| Well worth the wait!!!!!
You have me sitting on the edge of the chair waiting for the next chapter!!!!
Keep up the good work. |
| Tomi Angel |
11/14/04 - 01:39AM |
19: Chapter Eighteen- Blood Connections |
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this is sooooo cool!!! ur plot ideas are outta this world 4 sure!!! great job!!!
Author's Response: lol... thank you
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| faith_slayer89 |
11/13/04 - 09:15PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen- Blood Connections |
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I've been waiting soooo long for an update, so, yay! Another excellent chapter, as per usual. The way Leon lured Angel outside under the pretense of battle while everyone else was dying in the hotel, it reminds me of the stunt Angelus pulled on Buffy so he could kidnap Giles. Is that where you got that from?
Author's Response: You know me so well. LOL. Yeah, that's exactly where I got it from. I couldn't figure out a way for Angel to find his friends bodies. It just didn't make sense to leave them alone during a fight. Then I flipped on the TV and that episode was on. The fanfic gods were sending me a message I think. LOL. I'm glad you liked it. |
| faith_slayer89 |
11/05/04 - 04:41PM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Selfish Human Emotions |
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| Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. I loved Buffy's outburst at the end, and I think my heart stopped for a minute when Angel spoke at the end. Nice cliffhanger ending, by the way, because now I'm dying to know what Angel's gonna say to Buffy. |
| Tomi Angel |
11/05/04 - 06:51AM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Selfish Human Emotions |
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OMG I LUV THIS ONE...I TOLD ANOTHER FRIEND...WE'RE BOTH SPEECHLESS!!! WRITE SUM MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! WE BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Speechlees? Wow. And here I was thinking that this chapter was going to be boring. Since I'm getiing amazing reviews I'll try to write more. I have a three day weekend so I might be able to get another chapter up. Thank you and your friend for the review. |
| frenchtoast101 |
11/05/04 - 06:18AM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Selfish Human Emotions |
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Wow, this is absolutely amazing! You captured both Buffy and Connor's emotions so perfectly! And that whole thing about Angel and Leon being coonected....That was awesome too. I'm so glad Angel is waking up! Yay! Wonderful chapter, keep up the great work! =)
Author's Response: It's great to hear that I captured their emotions. I tried really hard to make it sound like something they would do because this was kind of a pivotal chapter. I thought that it was going to be really boring to you guys but I guess it isn't. Thank you for the review. I'm glad I can keep you guys interested even though it's taking me a long time to finish it. |
| Tomi Angel |
10/31/04 - 02:25AM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Fear |
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| waaa!!! this is so cool. PLZ DUN LET ANGEL DIE!!! like the angel lover said: if u let him die i'm gonna... |
| frenchtoast101 |
10/22/04 - 06:14AM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Fear |
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| Whoa. Angel isnt gonna die, is he?.....Very intense chapter-great job! = ) |
| The Angel Lovers |
10/21/04 - 06:36PM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Fear |
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Excellent chapter! You're freaking me out now, though. I swear, if you kill off Angel...
Author's Response: What are you going to do about it? LOL. I'm not telling you anything, that would just give it all away. Just wait and see. |
| Tomi Angel |
10/15/04 - 07:50AM |
16: Chapter Fifteen- Torn |
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| luv the story. muhahaha angelus!!! the story is rly awesome!!! can't wait until the next chapter! |
| frenchtoast101 |
10/01/04 - 08:07PM |
16: Chapter Fifteen- Torn |
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Wow, very, very dark. The way u described Mark's torturing had me wincing every other second! Keep up the excellent work! = P
Author's Response: LOL. I was kind of in a bad mood earlier. I had to take my agresion out on something. :) |
| faith_slayer89 |
10/01/04 - 05:18PM |
16: Chapter Fifteen- Torn |
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Excellent, excellent, very dark. Can't wait for more. This is rushed 'cause if I don't get off the computer now, I think my brother's gonna go homicidal on me. Lol.
Author's Response: LOL. What are brothers for except to bug you? I'm lucky mine is grown and out of the house. :) |
| mamathehut |
09/30/04 - 08:24PM |
15: Chapter Fourteen- The Gift |
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Loving the story - can't wait for the next chapter. You have a gift for writing!!!! The dream sequence is great! Glad you're feeling better, but hurry up with the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, glad you liked the dream sequence. LOL. I'll try to get the next chapter out to you soon, but I have to go back to school tomorrow so it might take a while. I'm working on it now though. |
| frenchtoast101 |
09/30/04 - 06:37PM |
15: Chapter Fourteen- The Gift |
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Don't worry about that dream squence, it was perfect. I like how you made Buffy remember how she died, which you also wrote splendedly. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad that I wrote it okay. I was getting worried there for a second. Thanks for the review. |
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