Reviews for The Darkness Within
| DarkProtector |
05/06/06 - 08:36PM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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| I liked it. Kind of anticlimatic but good none the less. great job.
Write a happy sequel. |
| michebabyblue |
01/20/06 - 02:34AM |
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| Um love this story and you said there is a sequl. Is it up yet or are you reading it cause you are so mean to end ur story on a cliffhanger. How ingenious of you. |
| Sunnydale_Revamped |
01/17/06 - 10:14PM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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| I have recently started reading fanfic based on my two favorite shows. I have written stories for years, and never once considered sharing my stories.
I have read many stories by other people, but I have to say yours actually inspired me to join this site and share my stories too.
You write as though you could be a writer for the show. You actually captured the characters and made me believe that i could be reading a script for the show! I sat at this computer and read your entire story and am just about to start on the sequel.
No other story I have read made me believe that it could be the actual characters.
You said you didn't think you were good, if that wasn't good I'd like to see what you think is!
Thanks for sharing and keep up the writing! I can't wait to read!
Hopefully once i get a story done, I'd love to hear what you have to say about it! |
| whiteslayer |
09/02/05 - 10:43PM |
1: Prologue |
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| WOW! amazing FF!!! i have to say a big kudos to you for this, very much the writing style i like to see! not many people capture the whole "angstyness" that BTVS has always been attributed with, and you got it! (w00t) i cant WAIT for the next wicked cool installment (have a few idea's on what could happen, but im restraining from writing any of these down..)
so overall well done! i cant wait to find out more on conner and how he is angels son.. (i didnt think vampires could make with the whole baby type of thing) Oh Oh! and that its nice to know angel, even thoight he was giving some girl the good stuff against a wall didnt turn to angelus, obviously the only thing that can bring him pure happiness is buffy (kind of romantic in that whole weird sort of way) i'll stop my rant and finish up now.
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"its called shows BUSINESS nicole, NOT show friends!" - Mary Cherry |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/10/05 - 03:38AM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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Oh my gosh.Did he kill her?Did he?That was such a great story.
Author's Response: THanks. Your questions will be answered in the sequel |
| rockangelz25 |
12/31/04 - 07:25PM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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| I liked it. Kind of strange ending--sequel, please? |
| B_A_always |
12/30/04 - 05:13PM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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| i hate it you are bad |
| lessthanangelic1 |
12/30/04 - 02:31PM |
1: Prologue |
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so i'm hoping that you're both messing with me and not. Reason for y i do- new and hopefully awesome ending to the story. Reason for y i don't- THAT IS JUST SO MEAN!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm mean, but not that mean, there is going to be a sequel, just look for it. |
| Psyche2 |
12/28/04 - 11:43AM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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Oh my God! What the......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What happened to Buffy?! Spike killed her?! What about Angel!?! This story is so awesome and then u end it like that and its still awesome but.....?!? Sequl Pleasssse!!!! Pretty Pretty Please!!!
Author's Response: You'll get your wish. don't worry. |
| lessthanangelic1 |
12/28/04 - 11:27AM |
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WHAT THE F***??? are you serious? it took you a month to update this damn story and now you just give up on it? that was the stupidest, and i don't care if that is a word or not, thing in the world. i am so mad, almost as mad as i was with the angel series finale. what a waste....
Author's Response: Calm down. I'm not that evil. I'd be doing the exact same thing if I was in your position though. It's so much fun to piss people off. Try it some time. LOL |
| frenchtoast101 |
12/28/04 - 09:56AM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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OMG! She died?! After all that? What happens to Angel? Connor? EVERYBODY? Nooo!! I must have more! Though I have to say, I was extremely surprised at the ending. The whole story was awesome though. Im still sad that its over. *tear*. Poor Buffy. After all of that, Spike Killed her like that. Wow, thats sucky. But I still love the story and its plots and Im looking forward to reading more fics from you. =)
Author's Response: Stop and think about this for a moment. Whats the main rule in TV and books. If you don't see someone die, they're not dead. I never said that Spike was the one who stabbed her either... |
| frenchtoast101 |
12/28/04 - 09:31AM |
19: Chapter Eighteen- Blood Connections |
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| You dedicated that to me? I feel so special! That chapter was amazing-Now I gotta go read the last of this *tear* brilliant story. =) |
| faith_slayer89 |
12/27/04 - 11:22PM |
21: Chapter Twenty- A Burning Ember |
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Ahhhhh, how come you're ending it there, just like that?! On a whole, the story was great, with the post-apocalyptic future and everything. And that bit with Spike at the end was great, too. But how can you just end it there?! What happened to Angel?! What happens with Leon?! DID SPIKE ACTUALLY STAB BUFFY?! (I thought he liked her at the end of S5.) If he didn't, who did?! DO BUFFY AND ANGEL END UP TOGETHER, OR DOES SHE DIE?! More importantly, WHY END IT ALL THERE?! WHY, WHY, WHY?! THERE'S SO MUCH MORE TO TELL! (again)?! *Ahem* Okay, my ranting is finished. The story was great and all. The last chapter was good, only I don't think it was suited for an end. The way I picture the story, it's like a half-arc. (If you didn't realize this from before) I REALLY wish you would reconsider and continue the story. Or at finish it in the way that there are no loose ends.
Author's Response: Breath. I'm not ending it like that. I'm not that evil. You know how emotional I get about endings like that. LOL. There will be more to come. Don't worry. |
| lessthanangelic1 |
11/28/04 - 04:34PM |
20: Chapter Nineteen- When Bad News Comes A Knockin' |
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alright...so i've just recently started to read fanfic...and this is the first one that i've ever been anywhere...work, school, wherever, and wanted to finish reading it so badly. PLEASE add more soon...you're doing a fantabulous job!
Author's Response: Wow, that's really cool. I'm glad that you've joined the world of fanfic. Thanks for the review, and I'm almost done with the next chapter. |
| faith_slayer89 |
11/22/04 - 03:38PM |
20: Chapter Nineteen- When Bad News Comes A Knockin' |
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| Eh, you can hardly tell that you were bad moody. Besides, I think that if you were pissed off when you wrote this particular chapter, then that's a good, since there's a lot of anger in here (or maybe that worked vice versa, I dunno...). Anyways, nice cliffhanger ending. Very...cliffhanger-y (not so good with the synonyms). ^_^ |
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