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Reviews for I Will Remember You




adancer 08/30/04 - 11:41AM 5: Ambush Signed
OH MY GOD!!!! that was a brillient chapter write more plzplzplz

Author's Response: Thanks! Will do!

Angellover 08/30/04 - 01:53AM 5: Ambush Signed
I SWEAR IF YOU KILL THEM OR MAKE IT SO THEY CAN'T BE TOGETHER I'LL COME TO CANADA AND I'LL PERSONALY TORTURE YOU UNTIL YOU CHANGE IT!!!!!! Now that thats over and done with.... LOL. I have to say that I absolutly loved this chapter. I think this is the best one yet. Everytime I think somethings cute my nose unvolentarally scrunches up. Well, I had about a dozen nose scrunchied while they were on the beach. Now they just need to kiss... and well, not die.. and I'll be a happy person. There was one sentence about three fourths down that didn't make sense though. It was: "The next little silent while they ate, though the occassional slurp of Sprite could be heard once in a while." That whole first part is confusing. I think you left out a word. You are the greatest for putting this out so quickly but I'll be after you if you don't have another part posted by tomorrow night. I'm dying to know what happens. Beleive, you don't want to mess with me, I threw an apple at the WB bilboard for goodness sake, I think I would be able to hunt you down. BWHAHAHAHA. :) Oh, and I love how Angel was yet again half naked. Thank you for that dedication. I feel so special! LOL I give this chapter a perfect 10!!!! ****CLAP CLAP CLAP*********

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. *takes a bow* Thanks for pointing out that sentence; you're right, it's kind of confusing. I'll go fix that right now, and start to work on Pt. 2!
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