Reviews for Secrets and Lies
| buffyfanallways |
07/25/05 - 05:45PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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This is a review for all of the chapters in this story, I really like it but maybe instead of the way you ended it you can write something like he becomes human and they get marred and the story goes on with they have kids and spend the rest of there life together I dont know It's something to think about.
Author's Response: While I understand you wanting kind of a happy fluffy ending, that is something that I absolutley couldnt' do. Most stories are ending like that, leaving nothing up to the imagination. This story needed to end where it was because if I wrote something about them living happily ever after and him becoming human and them having children and finally being together, then this wouldn't be a story about Buffy or Angel. Happy endings happen in these to shows but bad stuff is always on the horizon. So I couldn't in good faith end it really happy because then in my mind it would be nothing more then a fairy tale. Thank you for sharing with me your thoughts on this. I do like the fact that you didn't give me all sorts of praise and shared your opinion on it. Not many will do that. Thank you again for the review. |
| willow_qwert |
01/09/05 - 08:07PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| Neat what-if story. The reunion was a bit sappy, but I have to remember it's after several years of separation. You did a good job setting the stage for a long story that won’t drag. |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:18PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| I would have to agree. This is a really cute story, and your writing is fantastic. As I was reading, images of the reunion scene were resonating through my mind. Brilliant job! |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:43PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| Awwwwwww! What a sweet reunion! So filled with emotion! And do I sense some future conflict between Angel and Riley? "Jer-ry! Jer-ry! Jer-ry!" Lol. I'm goin' crazy from the lack of sleep. ^_^ Can't wait to read the other 10 chapters! ...By the way, what are you talking about? Your writing's great! ^_^ A perfect 10. |
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