Reviews for Secrets and Lies
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:32PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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| What happened to the whole soul clause, and why did he leave? J/W but yeah, lust much? Well, at least it's Angel and Buffy and not Buffy and Giles. *shivers* |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:31PM |
4: Chapter 4 |
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| Love the last line, and Willow's viewpoint. Better stay this good, 'cause this is so on my favourites list. ^_^ |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:26PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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| Same comment about the average family... I liked the little details too, like Tara's stuttering and Buffy's evasiveness with Riley. Loved the ending too, nice. |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:23PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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| I like the triangle with Angel, Buffy and Riley. Normally Spike is in place of Riley, and this just adds the unique twist of normalcy. I wished that they would wake up just once like this, and in IWRY, they did. Unfortunately, Buffy doesn't remember that. *cries* Ah well, awesome job!! |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:18PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| I would have to agree. This is a really cute story, and your writing is fantastic. As I was reading, images of the reunion scene were resonating through my mind. Brilliant job! |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 09:14PM |
11: Chapter 11 |
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No-no-no-no-no-no-no-no-no-she's-not-dead-he-won't-be-alone-she's-coming-back-yes-she-is-yes-she-is...right?
Author's Response: Okay, Sabrina? Breath. In and Out, in and out. LOL. Don't worry, I still have more chapters to write. You'll find the answer out soon. |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 09:10PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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| *gasp, sniffle, tear* Nooo... *sniff* So sad... |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:57PM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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| Ah-ha-ha-ha! "Jer-ry! Jer-ry! Jer-ry!" ...Oooh, showdown! Lol. Likin' how you're writing the romance scenes, they're really sweet. Okay, I'm not going to bed now, I don't care how many classes I fail! |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:54PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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| "...they spent the rest of the morning making love." Jeez, lust bunnies much? Lol. Really great so far. The only problem is that I might fail Media Studies...Lol. ^_^ |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:51PM |
4: Chapter 4 |
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| ...Holy crap. I know what's coming. ...Nice cliffhanger, by the way. ^_^ |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:49PM |
3: Chapter 3 |
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| "the white picket fence and the 2.5 kids" ..heh heh, nice. ^_^ |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:46PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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| I'd like to add another "Awwwwwww!" See, that's how life should be for Buffy and Angel. ...Screw Media Studies homework, I wanna finish reading the rest of the story you've written so far! |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/14/04 - 08:43PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| Awwwwwww! What a sweet reunion! So filled with emotion! And do I sense some future conflict between Angel and Riley? "Jer-ry! Jer-ry! Jer-ry!" Lol. I'm goin' crazy from the lack of sleep. ^_^ Can't wait to read the other 10 chapters! ...By the way, what are you talking about? Your writing's great! ^_^ A perfect 10. |
| filmtheory |
08/31/04 - 10:33AM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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This was a really satisfying story. It portrayed an Angel that I felt like we should have seen, but never did. I'm usually not a fan of "what if" stories, but this one (so far) is so deeply satisfying that I'm pretty much hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you for the response. I just thought we all needed to see Angel's side of this more then Buffy's. I'll try to update soon. |
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