Reviews for Secrets and Lies
| BelovedSlayer |
10/09/05 - 03:46PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| hey. just wanted to say that i think this fic is really amazing and fantastic and perfect. well, at least for me the only thing is i wish there was riley bashing because i hate his sorry boring ass all the way. he needs to drop dead but thats my opinion lol!!! if i were buffy, i would stay with Angel, not get married to some guy who's gonna bore you to death lol!! you done a fantastic job keep up the great work!! B/A forever! |
| buffyfanallways |
07/25/05 - 05:45PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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This is a review for all of the chapters in this story, I really like it but maybe instead of the way you ended it you can write something like he becomes human and they get marred and the story goes on with they have kids and spend the rest of there life together I dont know It's something to think about.
Author's Response: While I understand you wanting kind of a happy fluffy ending, that is something that I absolutley couldnt' do. Most stories are ending like that, leaving nothing up to the imagination. This story needed to end where it was because if I wrote something about them living happily ever after and him becoming human and them having children and finally being together, then this wouldn't be a story about Buffy or Angel. Happy endings happen in these to shows but bad stuff is always on the horizon. So I couldn't in good faith end it really happy because then in my mind it would be nothing more then a fairy tale. Thank you for sharing with me your thoughts on this. I do like the fact that you didn't give me all sorts of praise and shared your opinion on it. Not many will do that. Thank you again for the review. |
| willow_qwert |
01/09/05 - 08:07PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| Neat what-if story. The reunion was a bit sappy, but I have to remember it's after several years of separation. You did a good job setting the stage for a long story that won’t drag. |
| Tomi Angel |
10/15/04 - 07:12AM |
13: Chapter 13 |
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wow! i luv this!!! it's so sweet!!! i'm a huge fan of ur fanfics. they're so good!!! :) the ending is pretty good!
Author's Response: Thanks, I wasn't sure if I did the ending any good or not. I just needed to write the last chapter though, to me it seemed a little forced but then again, I never really like my work. LOL |
| Angeldove |
09/19/04 - 08:19PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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All I have to say about this chapter is to reference this line:
“Angel. I love you.” In mid climb, he froze. Not turning around his voice carried to her. “No you don’t.” And then he was gone. This last line of the chapter was so on point, I loved it. How could he believe she loved him and still have been able to do those things to him?
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought that that little sentence was perfect for the way I thought the characters felt at the time. I'm almost finnished with this story. I have like one more chapter left. I felt like I just needed to tell Angel's side of the story and everything. I wanted him to be the character you have sympathy for because alot of the times it's supposed to be the other way around. Thanks again for your comeents. I really loved to read them. |
| Angeldove |
09/19/04 - 08:17PM |
2: Chapter 2 |
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| I just started reading this fic and am hooked. I look forward to seeing how Buffy will deal with both Angel and Riley in her life, a triangle not often explored due to the overwhelming B/A, B/S angst (which I also love) but nice to see a change. My favorite part: Buffy’s thoughts as she relives the moment on the dock as Angel gives her the ring before he leaves, brought tears to my eyes…It was nice experiencing it again and set up the tone of this story from the start. Very nice. |
| faith_slayer89 |
09/18/04 - 09:58AM |
12: Chapter 12 |
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Encore, encore! :P That was such a sweet chapter, how his family understood and forgave him and watched over him and everything. Write more! ^_^
Author's Response: **Grin** I so wished they had done something like that on the show. But nooooo! Because that would be being to nice to Angel. |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:58PM |
12: Chapter 12 |
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Such a sweet ending. Off to see if you have any other stories, and by the whole keep going thing I meant writing. You're a brilliant author and deserve a lot more credit than these anonymous sites allow. Go publish something!
Author's Response: Wow. I'm not really sure what I should say. Thank you so much for your reviews and words of encouragement. They really mean alot to me. I'll definaltley have to post my other stories that are saved on my computer now. Oh, and by the way, Angel doesn't have that whole happiness clause because it just upsets me to much. LOL. Thank you again for your reviews. They mean alot. One of my dreams is to do something with writing one day. Hey, who knows, maybe I'll be writing for a TV show when I grow up. |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:56PM |
12: Chapter 12 |
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| His family is in heaven, and they believe in him now!!! **happy tears** now I can die happy. Amazing to think that people who have my kind of stubborness can save people like that. I bet they're really annoying the rest of the time. Not Angel though. He doesn't need to talk. He can just stand there and look gorgeous for me. I wont mind. Keep Going!!!!! |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:53PM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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| Yeah, I remembered what else I was gonna say. Angel is almost like Spike now, with the element of comfort and sex. hmmm |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:52PM |
11: Chapter 11 |
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| Well I know you keep going, but ahhhh! and awwwww. I loved the start, and I can imagine Buffy saying those things. But I don't know if she would still have felt the same way with Angel being there. *ponders* |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:48PM |
10: Chapter 10 |
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| If she dies, I'll cry more than I did during season 5, because this time she actually had a chance to be with Angel, and then she didn't. So, NO DYING!!!! *sniff* |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:47PM |
9: Chapter 9 |
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| Nice cliffhanger. I'm losing about an hour's sleep over this, it's already 1 AM... Oh well, I'm gonna go and hope that Buffy and Angel stop with the angst already. Still absolutely fabulous dahlin! |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:40PM |
8: Chapter 8 |
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| Yay, tension and angst, it's like you're Joss! |
| dreamsuntold |
09/17/04 - 11:37PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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| Nooooooooo! Bring Angel back!!!!! |
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