Reviews for Love Is Forever . . . Isn't It?
| faith_slayer89 |
08/25/04 - 12:29AM |
4: Part Four |
Signed |
| Excellent chapter. I love how you write your fight scene. The only thing I've noticed is that when you write, for example, "she thought to herself," the thought doesn't come next, like it got cut off, or something. |
|
|
|
|
Rave
Barbie Girl (Becca)
biscuit07
Filmtheory (Jim)
Malice (Jess)
MebbtheScribe (MichaelB)
Reset (Allie)
Shay (Marrisa)
somnambulist29 (Shea)
Stephanie Loss
Wendyness (Wendy)
Questions?Contact Us
|
|
All stories on this site have been archived with the authors' consent. Do not copy these stories for your own uses without the express consent of the author themselves. Buffy the Vampire Slayer TM and Angel TM are © UPN, WB, Fox and its related entities. All photos on the site are © UPN, Fox, Warner Bros, and/or their respective owners. No profits are being made by use of these images.
Powered with the assitance of eFiction.
|
|

|