Reviews for Bewitched
| filmtheory |
11/12/04 - 11:49PM |
3: Express Delivery |
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Great chapter. You have Giles’ voice down cold. Buffy’s reaction is both interesting and understandable. In a sense, Xander did rape Buffy. Magic is often compared to drugs on the shows. Amy’s love spell seems the magical equivalent of roofies. Nice cliff hanger ending to the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! ^-^ |
| filmtheory |
10/12/04 - 09:20PM |
2: The Afternoon After |
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Great chapter. i think you've captured the likely reactions of these characters very accurately. The parts dedicated to Buffy, and to a lesser extent Xander, reminded me of the classic "morning after" syndrome, complete with walk of shame. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've tried to capture the characters best I can in such a weird situation, and I'm pleased to hear they're somewhat convincing to the reader. I've finished the next chapter, and will upload it soon. Thanks again! |
| Poison Pen |
09/20/04 - 11:35PM |
1: 1-Gifts and Presents |
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Interesting--A very fun "what if." Check your email! :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the long review and useful tips you gave me-it meant a lot! That really was a dose of constructive criticism! ;-) |
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