Reviews for The story of a broken heart
| Dead not Stupid |
08/10/04 - 03:17PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
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| I really liked the story, you read so many about what happened to spike after/before he was sired but not what supposedly really happened during, so it was refreshing to read that.
One thing I did puzzle slightly over was the way you went from the outside of the family's home to the inside. The way you wrote seemed to be like an adaptation of a script and it does fit in, but with something so big as vampires not being able to enter unless invited it seemed that the invitation needed to be in there.
Other than that I enjoyed it and hope to hear more from you. |
| Dead not Stupid |
08/10/04 - 03:16PM |
1: Chapter 1 |
Signed |
I really liked the story, you read so amny about what ahppened to spike after/before he was sired but not what supposedly really happened so it was refreshing to read that. One thing I did puzzle slightly over was the way you went from the outside of the family's home to the inside. The way you wrote seemed to be like an adaptation of a script and it does fit in, but with something so big as vampires not being able to enter unless in vited it seemed to be needed to be in there.
Other than that I enjoyed it and hopeto hear more from you
Author's Response: jesus, never thought of that!!! thanks! i love to hear from everyone - thanks! |
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