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Spikes_British_Babe 07/28/04 - 05:52AM 1: Goodbye Dawn Signed
i luved it! i agree, Dawn is kinda annoying, but she did have a good character in some episodes nut was a little over dramatic...that last line roked...i luved it!

Chelle 07/28/04 - 03:44AM 1: Goodbye Dawn Signed
I really liked this. I agree with you about Dawn. Well to an extent. I never really liked her character, although I didnt hate her with a blinding passion either. I felt that she could be very bratty, and in the last season, when she told Buffy to leave the house...well, lets just say that I would have liked to have slapped her. This story is very well written, and a good ficlet. The last sentence, especially, was very powerful. A great ending. To the story as well as the character,and Im not usually a fan of character deaths, unless they are done well. And this was. Awesome job. :-D

Author's Response: Thank you aswell, one of my biggest ever reviews. I agree about Dawn, I didn't really hate her completely but the whole image of an annoying teenager just didn't work on the show. Thank you for the comment on the last sentence, it really described how I felt about Dawn. I didn't want her in Buffy, and I didn't love her in Buffy. Thank you again.

Violet SS 07/27/04 - 09:48PM 1: Goodbye Dawn Signed
Hi Benny. This was an interesting piece of writing. Though I kinda like Dawn, I think it would have been cool if they just killed Dawn off on the show. I really like the similie in the last sentence. I'm very impressed with your writing given your age.

Author's Response: Thank you.
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