Reviews for WiTs
| NaiveGhost |
03/15/06 - 05:53PM |
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This is a great story.
Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Another chapter is in the works now! |
| Wonkabar |
12/01/05 - 11:47PM |
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WOW! This is a great story. Lots of tension between Willow and Kennedy. Makes me wonder who Owen really is. Please update, soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Willow and Kennedy will eventually stop having tension with each other and start having it with other people. Then they'll have it with each other again. I'm so glad youwonder who Owen really is. I cut out all the exposition on his character so we could get it in installments. |
| littlewiccan |
11/05/05 - 08:49AM |
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Personally I like it as a stand-alone. Anyway you wrote Willow perfectly and I liked the way you potrayed Willow and Kennedy's relationship. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. really tried to get Willow, Kennedy, and their relationship down. That aspect of this story wa smostly a training ground for the series "Campus Life." Other aspects of this story might show up in other fics of mine, but I think for now, this will just be a stand-alone. |
| slayerfest |
09/23/05 - 09:37PM |
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But I'm not so sure series is the way to be. Owen's character begs for more attention, but I don't see a lot of potential in either Amanda or Kelly. They're fine for the story, but for the series they might just be stand-in fighters that can be put in or not. I think that because Owen is such a spectacular character, you might give him a spotlight story. The end was left open, but it's conclusive in its own way. I... well, no. I've changed my mind. I think it would be a good idea to open it as a round robin. People love the idea and they can contribute as they see fit.
Author's Response: I think the first chapter, if I were to make this a series, doesn't have enough of Amanda or Kelly to make them appealing. But in the first episode of Buffy, how developed were the characters? I think they'd develop over time. I'm worried about opening it as a round-robin as I fear Kennedy-haters would fill it with chapters about her being a brat and perhaps being killed in some horrible way. I don't have anything against anti-Kennedy stories, but that's not the feel I get from this one. I wouldn't want it to become a Kennedy-bashing forum. |
| slayerfest |
09/23/05 - 09:32PM |
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Error: "I want to go skinny dipping and drink Mai Tai's and spend an entire making love and cuddling." I assume that was supposed to be an entire day.
Other than that, this story is gorgeous. I love that Will and Kennedy are teaching classes, be it Watcher or Slayer. You've made this relationship a lot more dynamic than I ever found it to be on the show. Like you, I was never really opinionated on the Willow/Kennedy relationship, but this made me like them considerably more. You gave Kennedy depth. You portrayed Willow well. All in all, gorgeously done.
Author's Response: Glad I made Kennedy and WIllow come alive. Thanks for the review! |
| axel |
08/12/05 - 10:01PM |
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Great story, first of all, But I've notice that these review, have become a debate. So, since I think my opinion, is the only real truth (yes I rule) I want to weigh in. I did like Kennedy, and I don't think the critisium is fair. Of course people love Tara, I get that, (Personaly I never loved, or hated her, she was just there) And to be honest, for Willow to have a girlfriend, less than six months after her soulmate die, really didn't make that much sence. Plus Kennedy was really just a bit player, but being Willow's girlfriend, made her look like a major one. But, none of these problems had anything to do with the character herself, just the way she was handled, by the writers. So it's not really fair that she gets pick on. If there had been a season 8, and she hadn'd shown up until then, she whould have fit better (Shut up Axel). anyway, Thanks for putting up with me, and again great story.
Author's Response: I seem to like the characters that everyone else hates (Connor & Kennedy) and hate the characters I'm supposed to love (Buffy & Angel, shhh- don't tell anyone). Anyway, thanks for the review. |
| Willes |
07/15/05 - 01:07PM |
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I love this. I am a fan of the Kennedy/Willow pairing, I wish it had more time to develop on the show, but since it didn't I would love if your fic did! I would love if this was a series!
Author's Response: Yeah. I've since found out a lot of people don't like Kennedy, whcih surprised me. I thought she was cool. Anyway, Willow and Kennedy are major characters (though not *the* major characters) in my fic "Campus Life." If yo uliked this, you may want to check Campus Life out.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've since found out since writing this that a lot of people don't like Kennedy, whcih surprised me. I thought she was cool. Anyway, Willow and Kennedy are major characters (though not *the* major characters) in my fic "Campus Life." If yo uliked this, you may want to check Campus Life out. |
| Ghost |
05/16/05 - 06:53PM |
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Great story! I shall repeat was has already been said and tell you you greatly improved upon the Willow/Kennedy relationship. I didn't like the ending, though, simply because- It was an ending! Go for series, definately.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm thinking of putting it out there as a round robin as I barely have time to write the other few fics I have working. |
| redmoon |
04/09/05 - 10:33PM |
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Just discovered it. Excellent. I like the concept of a WiT school. If it were up to me: Series is the way to go.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don't think I really have time to work on it, but I might put it out there as a round robin at some piint. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
03/30/05 - 09:19PM |
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Hey I read it again.You really should make a series out of this.Great review.2 big thumbs WAY up!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
02/25/05 - 06:02PM |
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This was a really good story.Making it into a series would be pretty good.I know I would read it.I hope that you continue to make more stories like this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story. I may do a series out of this, but I already have two (and possibly a third) running, so it may be a while before I come back and revisit this. I may also just pillage it for characters for my other series. But maybe I should go on with this. Thanks Again! |
| Selene |
01/09/05 - 02:39PM |
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I really liked this story. Which is a first for me to like anything that has KennedyWillow pairing in it. I felt like your couple was much more believable than they were in the series. The chemistry that wasn't there on screen you created here. Great job. I like the very real fears that Willow is having and the crush of Owen's is sweet. Please continue this story line. You may convert me to Killow yet... ; )
Author's Response: No one seems to like Killow. I'm like the one person on the face of the planet who thought Kennedy was okay. Not great, but okay. Part of it, I think, is that I hated Tara. Sorry. I'm glad I gave them some chemistry, but I think most of the credit goes to the reader on such things. You're imagination is what makes this work. So thanks for reading, imagining, and reviewing! |
| rockangelz25 |
12/29/04 - 02:08PM |
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I like it. I wasn't that big a fan of Willow/Kennedy, but the series didn't exactly leave that relationship much time to develop. I like the way that it moves on in this story, and it'd be really interesting if you made it into a series, although it's also good as a stand-alone.
Author's Response: I may come bacxk to this as a series, but I think I'll leave it as is for now. In all liklihood, I'll just raid it for characters and move on. |
| Revello1620 |
11/23/04 - 12:03AM |
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I enjoyed this, even though I am not a fan of the Willow/Kennedy ship in general. I have always felt that the show forced those characters together, but in your story it is a much more natural pairing. I am anxious to see more on this one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I never particularly liked or disliked W/K. I liked it better than Willow and Tara (Sorry). The only reason Kennedy's in the story is I didn't want to have them mysteriously broken up before the story began. I may continue WiTs someday, but I'm working on two other series right now, so it won't be for a while. In the end, I think I'll just steal all my cool characters. |
| adancer |
09/08/04 - 02:44PM |
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That was an amazing story! I loved it! You should definately make it a series. To hell with anyone else I would read it!!!
I also love the way Willlow is the main character, usually it's Buffy! And theis Owen sounds ineresting. Very inrteresting. I can almost see a soulmate for Dawn!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! A lot of people seem to want me to continue, so I’ll definitely do that as soon as I wrap up Running on Faith. People seem to be responding well to Owen, so he’ll definitely be in the story a lot. |
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