Reviews for WiTs
| Spicule |
04/20/06 - 07:34PM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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Another excellent chapter. It's great how you can condense so much character and plot development in (relvatively) short chapters, holding on to several of hte key elements. And lemme just give you the "Andrew of the Year" award, cause his character 'bloody brilliant!' I love his little quarrel with Owen, and dude - he came out of the closet! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I liked where they left Andrew on the series. However, I think there’s mileage to be gotten out of him. Andrew will be a major player in this series, at least for a while. Thanks again! |
| NaiveGhost |
03/15/06 - 05:53PM |
1: WiTs |
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This is a great story.
Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Another chapter is in the works now! |
| twinblade |
03/10/06 - 08:22AM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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Good chap. Any chance of Xander or Faith showing up? I'm a big X-fan and FAith is just too cool for words.
Author's Response: I don't know if they'll show up in this story, however "Running on Faith" is, as the name suggests, about Faith. Xander shows up in the second "season" of that story. |
| always angel |
03/07/06 - 11:12PM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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Poor Owen he never gets a break. I really wanna know whos after him in England. And I agree with Owen, i think Andrew still has evil in him, hes just waiting to make his move.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. None of these characters get a break!!! If they did, the story will be boring. As for Andrew . . .keep reading. |
| Raven |
03/01/06 - 06:52PM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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Oh wait, Axel was talking about Kenny, not Andrew. Probably why he said, SHE. I'm not awake, or sane, please forgive me.
Author's Response: Yeah, but I still think Kennedy'll be okay. |
| Raven |
03/01/06 - 06:47PM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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I don't know Axel. he was going after Dawn too. Sorry, I get distracted. Anyhow, I really like this story. What's up, with Andrew's Mom?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for Andrew’s mom, you’ll have to keep reading. *cackles evilly* |
| axel |
03/01/06 - 06:45PM |
3: 03: Inquest |
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If we take her off active duty, it will reinfource her self dout. Of coarse keeping her on, may get everybody killed, but hey, what's important? Good work. .
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And nah, I don't see Kennedy staying on the job getting anyone killed. Maybe. |
| Raven |
01/23/06 - 05:52PM |
2: 02: Relocation |
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Looks like Kennedy's going to jail. Or mabye The dungon, or whatever they do with slayers. Possesed animals are fun. I look forward to the rest.
Author's Response: MAYBE Kennedy's going to jail. We'll see. And yes, possessed animals rock. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| Ksue |
01/20/06 - 01:00PM |
2: 02: Relocation |
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Great, great story. I love it, even though I'm not a fan of Willow/Kennedy. Can't wait to read the rest. You've done a wonderful job so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for reviewing. I was indifferent to Will and Kenn, but so many people write Kennedy off so quickly that I really wanted to work with her. Thanks for being so kind. |
| Wonkabar |
12/01/05 - 11:47PM |
1: WiTs |
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WOW! This is a great story. Lots of tension between Willow and Kennedy. Makes me wonder who Owen really is. Please update, soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Willow and Kennedy will eventually stop having tension with each other and start having it with other people. Then they'll have it with each other again. I'm so glad youwonder who Owen really is. I cut out all the exposition on his character so we could get it in installments. |
| axel |
11/28/05 - 03:09AM |
2: 02: Relocation |
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Great chapter. I'm a little surprised though. I always though this was a one shot deal. But it's shaping up so far.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It was a one shot deal because I couldn't come up with any new plot ideas. Now I have a lot of them and you'll hopefully be seeing them soon. |
| always angel |
11/28/05 - 02:47AM |
2: 02: Relocation |
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That is not good! This is a great story. Uodate son.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll update again for sure. Chapter three will be quicker coming than chapter two, lol. |
| littlewiccan |
11/05/05 - 08:49AM |
1: WiTs |
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Personally I like it as a stand-alone. Anyway you wrote Willow perfectly and I liked the way you potrayed Willow and Kennedy's relationship. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. really tried to get Willow, Kennedy, and their relationship down. That aspect of this story wa smostly a training ground for the series "Campus Life." Other aspects of this story might show up in other fics of mine, but I think for now, this will just be a stand-alone. |
| slayerfest |
09/23/05 - 09:37PM |
1: WiTs |
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But I'm not so sure series is the way to be. Owen's character begs for more attention, but I don't see a lot of potential in either Amanda or Kelly. They're fine for the story, but for the series they might just be stand-in fighters that can be put in or not. I think that because Owen is such a spectacular character, you might give him a spotlight story. The end was left open, but it's conclusive in its own way. I... well, no. I've changed my mind. I think it would be a good idea to open it as a round robin. People love the idea and they can contribute as they see fit.
Author's Response: I think the first chapter, if I were to make this a series, doesn't have enough of Amanda or Kelly to make them appealing. But in the first episode of Buffy, how developed were the characters? I think they'd develop over time. I'm worried about opening it as a round-robin as I fear Kennedy-haters would fill it with chapters about her being a brat and perhaps being killed in some horrible way. I don't have anything against anti-Kennedy stories, but that's not the feel I get from this one. I wouldn't want it to become a Kennedy-bashing forum. |
| slayerfest |
09/23/05 - 09:32PM |
1: WiTs |
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Error: "I want to go skinny dipping and drink Mai Tai's and spend an entire making love and cuddling." I assume that was supposed to be an entire day.
Other than that, this story is gorgeous. I love that Will and Kennedy are teaching classes, be it Watcher or Slayer. You've made this relationship a lot more dynamic than I ever found it to be on the show. Like you, I was never really opinionated on the Willow/Kennedy relationship, but this made me like them considerably more. You gave Kennedy depth. You portrayed Willow well. All in all, gorgeously done.
Author's Response: Glad I made Kennedy and WIllow come alive. Thanks for the review! |
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