Reviews for Her First Kiss
| adancer |
09/30/04 - 02:08AM |
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Loved your fic as I've always thought about D/C but never read any. I would read your story but as it's rated R i can't. I'm only 13! sorry! bu great anyway!
Author's Response: Thirteen! Wow, I wouldn't have guessed from your writing. And yes, probably best to stay away, some adult content on a few chapters though probably closer to PG-13, however when in doubt I always over rate. Better to be safe and not compromise anyone's values. Thanks for your review. |
| Kevin |
09/03/04 - 10:50AM |
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Wow! This was really hot. Of course, I'm kind of a D/C 'shipper, so I might be an easy sell. I'm definitley going to check out your whole story.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it, even if the sell was easy! Thanks for the great review. I hope you enjoy the fic in its entirety. |
| filmtheory |
07/22/04 - 03:27PM |
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I really liked this story. Most stories centering on a first kiss, or any kiss for that matter, tend to be mushy and trite. Yours is neither. I actually think it was very erotic without being extremely sexual. It's just a kiss, after all. Have you thought of a career as a romance wirter?
Author's Response: Funnily enough, I have considered it....I have 80 pages of a romantic suspense in the works, however it's been 80 pages long for 10 years now, so in the works is more than an exaggeration. It has great character development but lacks a plot (kinda have to have one of those, well unless it’s one of those trashy sex is the plot novels...hmmm) so anyway, I don't see me ever finishing that one. Perhaps the YA fantasy novel I'm working on will fare better? There’s some pg-13 romance in there, so who knows? |
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