Reviews for Agent Finn Under Cover
| babydoll |
05/21/05 - 11:11PM |
1: 1x1Pilot - Pushed to your arms |
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| I like it a lot . |
| always angel |
07/30/04 - 11:02PM |
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| Excellent job! You are a very talented writer. I can't believe how young you actually are. You write a heck of a lot better than most people your age. Keep the story going. |
| MebbtheScribe |
07/29/04 - 02:45PM |
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Very different twist to the story. I wonder where you're going with it. Excellent job.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm wondering myself where exactly it's going! I know the basic storyline, but I'm not sure what's going to happen in the meanwhile. But thank you again. |
| MebbtheScribe |
07/26/04 - 10:10AM |
3: 3x1Cage of the Future |
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Wow. I did not expect that. Poor Sam. You got me feeling for her. The way you have the trauma interwoven into their lives, affecting everything they do, is good. When Anyanka (great that you brought here back) mentioned Riley was tracking the wrong demon makes me wonder. Mystery. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanx, yeah I'm trying to make her into a sad part of the story, so that later on when she is removed for a while, people start to wonder about why she went, so the next thing happens with her, it's as a shock that everyone expected. Thanx for a second review, and hopefully I will keep it up, lol. |
| MebbtheScribe |
07/26/04 - 09:28AM |
1: 1x1Pilot - Pushed to your arms |
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You're twelve years old? Very impressive. What you did with Riley's emotions was great writing. I expected him to try to forget Buffy, and yet you have him going for Sam because of Buffy, and in the end...hollow. Nothing left. Great start to your Finn episode. I look forward to the second chapter.
Author's Response: Thanx, I do hope you like the next chapters, the third is around half way thorugh right now. And once again your story refuge is fanstastic. |
| Shay |
07/24/04 - 12:27PM |
3: 3x1Cage of the Future |
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I liked it. I love when people explore minor characters, more in depth. Sam was not one of my favorite minor characters, but I think she still deserves explaining. Keep writing more! -Marissa
Author's Response: Thanx. I know that Riley and Sam wern't peoples favourite characters, but I thought they deserved more expaining. Sam will be removed from the story in the next chapter, and Buffy and the gang will be introduce properly 2 chapters after that. Riley will be pushed back a little for the rest of this series, as I introduce other new characters and explain them. I am hoping that people will like this story, as I am enjoying writing it. |
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