Reviews for Future
| tears_i_cry |
07/20/05 - 08:27PM |
1: Episode 1 |
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I loved this story. Thought I'd return the favor for reviewing. Some of it confused me. Like at the end when Dawn ran through Spike but then Spike patted Dawn on the back. And I think Buffy would've been a little different seeing Angel and Spike together or Angel and Spike would've fought more, argued actually. Anyways, very good story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I am actually in the process of rewriting much of 'Future'. I have not written on it in a while, and when I re-read it, I noticed some much needed changes. Thank you for bringing some more to my attention. And thanks again for the review, I look forward to reading more of your fanfic in the future. -Marissa |
| spikelover6661 |
07/19/04 - 04:07PM |
1: Episode 1 |
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I loved it and have no problems with it. I liked how you presented Buffy's new ability to deal with tension. And this is a very tensikn arousing from the very first minute. I love it now and I think it would rock after you edit it and help it to evolve even more. I wish it were a real episode, I can't wait to read the second episode and thanks for your review on "Not As Dark". It really encouraged me to write more fan fics. I loved it. Oh, and I'm glad somebody else noticed how funny the Mutant Enemy thing is at the end of Buffy and Angel. Loved it.
Author's Response: Hi! I've always loved the Mutant Enemy thing! I'm glad someone besides me noticed that! "Not As Dark" was great! Thanks for the encouragment! I always love getting reviews from people, especially if I have reviewed them. I always read something of everyone who reviews my fanfic. If you guys can take the time to read mine, I can take the time to read yours! I hope you write more soon, so I can read! Thanks again for your review, and I'll post more episodes later! |
| Elysian |
07/18/04 - 11:51AM |
1: Episode 1 |
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I've got a small issue with this, besides the script format which I usually detest.
Spike comes back in this, no mention of how or why he's back or anything. Buffy sees him and and it's not "Oh, I'm so glad you're not dead" It's just "Oh . . . you're not dead, anyone want a sandwitch". And then Spike leaves with Angel in the end which is totally un-Spikelike. I'm a big Spike fan . . . obviously. I just can't get past the wrongness of this.
Author's Response: I'm a huge Spike fan as well, as a matter of fact, some could call me obsessed. But I'm trying to keep with Season 5 of Angel, which means I can't deal much with Spike right now, since he is sort of ghost like. This script, is not absolutly finished, it is still being edited, and changed every day. And about the Spike/Buffy conversation when they see each other, if you remember, when Buffy sees Angel, it is the same way. They are both very cold to one another. It's just how Buffy is. She can't get to close to Spike. She's happy he's alive, but she has other priorities. When I have finished editing it, I will let you know, so you can read it, and tell me what you think. Thanks for the review! |
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