Reviews for Secrets Exposed
| Kevin |
11/04/04 - 11:13AM |
9: Consequences |
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Exciting fight. I like that Dawn is pretty smart and knows Connor's going out to get what he can't get from her. Of course, she doesn't realize HOW he's getting it, but she's still right. Why can't the poor kid just jerk off like the rest of us?
Author's Response: Cute, not going to that place, but who knows what he does when he comes home from a sexually frenzied night of slaying....but, still not going there. |
| Violet SS |
07/24/04 - 07:34PM |
9: Consequences |
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| I really like Dawn and Connor's relationship in this fic. The way she got her way about going for a walk was so perfect. And you still write "intimate" scenes with beautifully realistic imagery. But I'm not sure at this point whether Dawn knew they were attacked by a demon and if she doesn't know, then why not? But I'll keep reading to see.
Come on, people! Read and review this story! It's great!
Author's Response: You know, I considered the fact that I was leaving this a bit unanswered, mostly because I didn't want to shift to her point of view to answer this question. But all will become clear soon. Thanks for your read and review support! It is greatly appreciated. |
| filmtheory |
07/12/04 - 06:20PM |
9: Consequences |
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The story still has great interaction. I love the traditional male/female sexual roles being amplified by past events. More great dramatic irony: Connor *is* going out to get what Dawn won't give him- just not in the way she thinks. he is, after all, killing demons to relieve sexual frustration.
Author's Response: Why yes he is getting’ some isn’t he? Not of the naughty naked kind he’d like, but in a naughty way nonetheless. And I too love to play with the male/female traditional vs modern, as neither interprets the female role as lesser, especially as we modern fems tend to blur the line instead of staying steadfastly to the far side of each. And isn’t the gray area always where the fun lives? Who wants the rules and regs of structured black and white? I say no to the Alliance, and long live the browncoats (if you don’t know Firefly this goes way over your head). However Filmtheory does know the continued line of genius that is Joss Whedon which was only intensified into probably his best compilation of work to date…The Firefly Series. Yes, my sales pitch. Hope it works….buy it, you’ll love it, I promise. |
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