Reviews for Secrets Exposed
| Kevin |
11/04/04 - 11:11AM |
8: Memories Of Darkness |
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Quite a curveball we get at the end there. So, I'm needing to read on and see what this "problem" is. Connor making fun of Buffy's name was hysterical. I suppose this means Connor doens't know who "Buffy Summers" is. That seems unlikely, but it also makes for a better story, so I'm going with it. Poor Connor. Wait til he has to tell Dawn about his family.
Author's Response: Yeah, I get what you mean about the likelihood that Connor hasn't heard of Buffy, but I went with the fact that she was never discussed in his presence on the show, and somehow felt ok that I wasn't contradicting previous storyline (because that never happened on the actual show) :) |
| Violet SS |
07/20/04 - 10:16PM |
8: Memories Of Darkness |
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Great chapter. Not a very original review, I'm afraid. I basically echo what filmtheory said. I like the parallelism about the secrets they are keeping from one another--building anticipation for when everything comes out!
Author's Response: And how soon it will. I just hope I don't let you down as to how it all happens. |
| filmtheory |
07/12/04 - 06:19PM |
8: Memories Of Darkness |
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Very funny chapter with Connor and Dawn dodging the tough questions. With his perfect life in place, I'm surprised Connor was honest enough to say as much he did. GREAT CLIFF HANGER ENDING! Lucky for me, the next chapter is already up.
Author's Response: You suggested the cliff-hanger endings...guess they are less effective when posting the following chapter so closely! |
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