Reviews for Secrets Exposed
| BuffyFanatic |
07/06/05 - 09:59PM |
2: By the Light Of Dawn |
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I love it! I know I read the prolouge like so long ago, but I forgot what the title of the fan fiction was. Anyway, I found it and now I'm going to try my best to read the whole thing. It's great so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope you enjoy reading the rest. It's nice to know that there are some new readers still out there. Thank you so much for your kind review. |
| Kevin |
09/03/04 - 10:56AM |
2: By the Light Of Dawn |
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I didn't want to review the prologue because, even though it was good, it was short. The prologue and the first chapter are awesome! They're a great contrast to each other. One shows Connor as a hunter in the dark of night. The next gives us Connor as unlikely romantic guy and Dawn as the hottie he has his eye on. That quick switching of gears between the supernatural and the mundane (not that falling in love is mundane) is what the Buffyverse was built on. So far I haven't had huge luck with finding good fanfic. I'm so glad I found Secrets Exposed.
Author's Response: I don't know what to say except thanks for the great review. It's nice to know that there are readers out there that are willing to start reading a long fic, even when it is already 15 chapters in. I hope you continue to enjoy it. |
| Violet SS |
07/11/04 - 12:57PM |
2: By the Light Of Dawn |
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Yay! Cute Connor and Dawn. Their dialogue is so perfect, I can hear them saying it. I loved Connor's thoughts and Dawn's clumsiness. Oh, and this was so funny "Connor noticed a girl attempt to slip unnoticed into class."
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue, it was actually harder to capture their true voice than I thought it would be. |
| filmtheory |
07/05/04 - 06:35PM |
2: By the Light Of Dawn |
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This is a really, really good start to a story. You really seem to have the Connor and Dawn characters down, even in the little dialogue that they have. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing this story. One of the hardest things for me was really getting Connor and Dawn's voices true. New chapters coming very soon, like tomorrow soon. Thanks again! |
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