Reviews for Secrets Exposed
| Tennyo |
09/22/05 - 06:29PM |
7: Her First Kiss |
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I'll agree with filmtheory. Hands down the hottest first kiss ever written! wish my first kiss was like that. Hell my fiancee (also the man who gave me my first kiss) wishes our first kiss was like that, but no such luck. got way better with practice though!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review. I'm really excited about how people responded to that little chapter that dealt with such a small moment that took 800 words to get out. Let me know what you think of the rest. Thanks again for taking the time to review. |
| BabeBuffy |
08/15/05 - 03:07AM |
21: All Good Things... |
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please continue buffy and angel have to at least snogg please i need more B/A.
Author's Response: I really wish I had the time. Maybe in January when my season dies down a little. I love me some Angel and Buffy too, I do have some ideas.... |
| Chelle |
07/09/05 - 10:12PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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Im so glad that you got your ending out! It was a long time coming, but soooo worth it. You know how I love your style and ideas, and this story didn't disappoint. Sorry it took so long for me to review. Ive been out of the loop lately, and I hadn't checked this site in months, until today that is. But Im very glad I did! I will keep checking for your new stuff. As always, Im a fan. Keep in touch!
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond. I too have been away for awhile, busy with it seems everything. Thank you for your review, as always it means a lot to me. |
| BuffyFanatic |
07/06/05 - 09:59PM |
2: By the Light Of Dawn |
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I love it! I know I read the prolouge like so long ago, but I forgot what the title of the fan fiction was. Anyway, I found it and now I'm going to try my best to read the whole thing. It's great so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I hope you enjoy reading the rest. It's nice to know that there are some new readers still out there. Thank you so much for your kind review. |
| terry |
06/11/05 - 12:29PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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Man, this story was cool. I hope you do another, but if not, this one stands on its own as a great story. It developed from something so typical into a story so far from where it began. I just love that. Plus, everything makes sense that it would happen like it did.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I felt I may have lost some early readers who were turned off by the strict romance feel of the story, thus missing the more the ending held. I'm glad I didn't lose you. I am also glad you see it as a stand alone worthy story. I too feel that it can be left just as it is. But for all those out there freaking that I just said that, it doesn't rule out a sequel. Thank you for reading and reviewing it really means a lot to me. |
| Kevin |
06/11/05 - 12:27PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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Wow- what a great ending! It was sad, but not completely. there were a lot of nice moments between Angel and Connor as well as Buffy and Dawn. It definitely left me feeling like the story wasn't over (hint hint). Even if it is, I still feel like Dawn and Connor had a wonderful love and still have people who care about them in their lives. Great story! Great ending!
Author's Response: Thank you. I always worried I wouldn't do justice to your idea of Dawn and Connor's romance. And yes, no matter what the future holds, they still have this love, and will forever be bound by it. Thank you for your wonderful reviews. |
| angelandbuffy |
06/10/05 - 10:34PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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=O im really a buffy and angel person but i think this is a great story! i esspecially loved it when buffy fell on top of angel...so cute together! lol well nice job! Keep up da good work!
Author's Response: Well I am glad I was able to draw a devoted Angel and Buffy fan into a centically Dawn and Connor story. Thank you for reading and reviewing. |
| filmtheory |
06/03/05 - 12:09PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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This was a perfect ending for the story. A lot of people are saying it’s a sad ending, but I think it’s more bittersweet. Yes, our lovers are split up for the time being, but both Angel and Buffy plan on trying to find a solution. Plus, maybe Angel wins the big battle with Wolfram & Hart. Okay, I’m stretching. As for a sequel, I think it would be extremely welcome. However, you have to write what feels natural and all that crap. I think it would be a great story though. There’s a lot of conflict built in. Angel and Buffy have big responsibilities, yet they’re trying to find a way to get Dawn and Connor together. Maybe one of the two of them meets someone else and has this weird relationship. Like “I’m with you until I can get back together with the one I really love.” One thing I know for sure is that this story was awesome! It was completely enthralling from start to finish. Part of me is very sad it’s over.
Author's Response: Here you are, already setting up storyline for the sequel!! You never disappoint. I am glad you felt it was bittersweet, as that is how I felt when I wrote it. The entire story was meant to shadow the relationship between Buffy and Angel, so to me, there could be no other ending than this one. Thank you so much for your tireless energy and exceptionally thought out reviews. This story expanded and became what it did, directly due to you. You forced me look outside the box of the traditional romance to form a story with more depth and I am forever thankful to you for this. |
| always angel |
05/30/05 - 01:17AM |
21: All Good Things... |
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I absolutely love this story. Please make a sequal!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Who knows about the future and a sequel....I haven't ruled it out so that is something. |
| ferret8541 |
05/28/05 - 07:16PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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i am very impressed with this story. i am sorry i haven't reviewed sooner. i am trying to read 12 stories at once. please don not be discouraged by a lack of reviews. this story deserves a sequel. there are way too many unresoled issues to just leave us hanging.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and taking the time to leave me this review, it does mean a lot. As far as a sequel, as you can see by my other responses, it isn't out of the question. Its just all about time. |
| Sean |
05/28/05 - 05:31PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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I don't like be left hanging like this- u'd better make a sequal.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story, and I am sorry you felt you were left hanging, I was really trying to create an ending that left a sense of hope and let the readers infer as to what the future holds for them. However, with the outcries for a sequal, I am considering it. |
| Nedaf |
05/28/05 - 01:07PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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Wow! Great story! I started reading it today, and now it's all done, I only have one thing to say: Sequel please! I wanna know if they find a way to be together!
Author's Response: I really am thinking about it. I promise, but my other writing has been suffering, so I am not sure I would be able to devote the time needed to give them the story and voice they deserve. So, perhaps in a month or two, you may see something...... |
| redmoon |
05/26/05 - 08:42PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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Supremely poetic. Milton would be proud. Shakespeare would be crying. Very, very well done; an excellent conclusion. Now after compliments like that, you have to promise me something: for God's sake, you have to write a sequel!!!!
Author's Response: We will see about that sequel...so no promises yet. But I am glad that you enjoyed the story. And thank you for the very kind words, it's one step towards a reason to find the time to continue their love story. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
05/26/05 - 04:59PM |
21: All Good Things... |
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this is sooooooooo sad!You're gonna make me cry.
Author's Response: Well I hope although it was sad, it was true for you, because that is what I am always striving to write, the true ending. Not the happy one, not the tearjerker, just the one that makes sense. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| BuffyFanatic |
05/26/05 - 01:02PM |
1: Prologue: The Destroyer |
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I've only had a chance to read the prolouge, but I have bookmarked this story so that I can come back to it when I have more spare time. I really like the start to it and I like the idea of the whole Dawn and Connor thing.
Author's Response: Thank you. I look forward to hearing what you think. I hope you enjoy it. |
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