Reviews for Running on Faith, Season One
| Quortoth |
01/22/06 - 08:24PM |
9: Episode 9: Departures (from the norm) |
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................Wow.........That was different. :-) Good story, I liked the getting drunk, [most of it (Eyes wide)] Hotwire please, that was funny, Runaway. Cut herself shaving. This has left an awkward situation all over. I had Anne Rice flash backs too (Eyes wide opened.)
Don't take that the wrong way, I like Anne Rice A lot. :-P lol. Pretty good, Pretty good.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. And yeah, I suppose different would be a way to describe it. I wanted to do a chapter that was drama and emotion more than action. I also got the chance to make a few dirty jokes as well, so that was fun. I hope the pairing works for you. Not as a couple, but in the context of the story and what lead them to it. And yes, of course there will be some very awkward repercussions. |
| Quortoth |
01/16/06 - 03:44PM |
8: Episode 8: Can We Just Pretend |
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Another one I enjoyed. Dawn is growing up. I get the mature feeling, reading her parts, etc.
Author's Response: I wanted to shower a more mature and self-assured Dawn. Don't get mne wrong, the insecurity is still there, but she can control it. I guess she's kind of my story's Willow. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:51PM |
7: Episode 7: Sunnydale |
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I'm really loving this story. Wow.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and for reviewing. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:50PM |
6: Episode 6: Almost a Jailbreak |
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I'm really excited so far about, 'who's the Risen One. Another good story.
Author's Response: I hope you're not disappointed by the the resolution to the RIsen One mystery. Thanks for the review. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:48PM |
5: Episode 5: Heartland and Homeland |
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I love the conversations between Faith and Eve. Another great story.
Author's Response: I was going for a Hannibal Lecter in reverse type of thing. Thanks for the review. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:46PM |
4: Episode 4: Failed Transport |
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Thanks to this story, I think you'll go far, go places with your writing abilities. I liked this story alot.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliments. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:45PM |
3: Episode 3: Everybody’s Got an Angle |
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I liked the conversation between Conner and Spike the most. And Conner would be a funny terrorist.
Author's Response: Much like the Dawn/Connor repartee of the previous chapter, I wanted some funny lines between Spike and Connor. |
| Quortoth |
01/11/06 - 12:33PM |
2: Episode 2: Trial Separation |
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I liked how Dawn's and Conner's comments went back and forth, and the poor team, sharp objects aren't really one's friend. Good chapter, I'm going to go read some more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad the witty repartee worked for you. There’s more of that, and of course action, to come. |
| Quortoth |
01/09/06 - 02:19PM |
1: Pilot: Goodbye Boston |
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I loved that story. Faith was talking down Conner, that was mean. But it was funny. I loved it even that down talking.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Faith is pretty hostile in this particular chapter, but she'll warm up to everyone eventually. Well . . . probably. |
| dutchgirl |
11/20/05 - 07:49AM |
22: Episode 22: You Call This a Finale? |
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I’m very happy you decided to write a spin-off with these characters. I personally think Faith, Connor and Dawn had more potential to grow then the show had shown. I also like that you decided to not make Buffy or Angel a regular because these characters tend to become the leading-roles and the other characters fall into their shadows, but they are very important characters to f/c/d so you let them drop by at the most important parts were there suppose to show up as a sister, boss or a father. Then as a forth character you throw in Spike and he is very good choice I think because he kind off supports them and becomes the link between f/c/d and b/a. He also becomes more off a character on his own, in season 7 he hardly had any connection with the other scoobies just Buffy witch is a shame, I had hoped they would have sort of restored the relationship between Spike and Dawn, witch you do, Hooray!! The story is also well-thought-through, I liked what you did with Connor's character (amazing). His story-line also supported Faith's who was becoming a leader on her own (defying Buffy), but also keeping Faith human who makes ‘mistakes’ by not letting her kill the mayor witch to me makes sense, she loved him and he was there for her when nobody else was so you tend to look the other way. I wish this would have aired on t.v. people would have loved it, I at least did ^^.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Obviously I agree that Faith, Dawn, and Connor had a lot of untapped potential. I hope to make the characters keep growing. I feel like maybe I’ve been too stagnant in my development of Faith, but we’ll see. I also thing you’re correct that Angel and Buffy tend to dominate whatever stories they’re in. That’s why they’re occasional guest stars, but not regulars. Spike will be reconnecting with a lot of people and I’m glad you like what I did with Connor and Faith. I like it when my plots get called amazing :) Thanks again so much for reviewing. It means so much to me that you took the time to do that. |
| Buffymanic |
07/11/05 - 08:49AM |
8: Episode 8: Can We Just Pretend |
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wow this just keeps getting better, Ioved the Buffy/Riley action on the plane and was actually gutted when they stopped- but good writing! This baby killings terrified me and made em feel sick to my stomach, as a mother of a two yr old that hit a little too close to home but I thinl it worked for the storyline, I just wasn't expecting it to be so dark. Over all I think it was an excellent conclusion to the storyline.
Author's Response: yeah, I wanted to give everyone the feleing of "Yeah, it's wrong for Riley to do this, BUT GO FOR IT!" Then I wanted to pull the plug on them. You're almost up to my most controversial episode, so please keep going- LOL.
Author's Response: Forgot to mention- sorry for the sick to the stomach baby-bit. I was going for scary and horrible, but I guess I should warn parents of babies to skip a section. Sorry about that. |
| Buffymanic |
07/10/05 - 03:58PM |
4: Episode 4: Failed Transport |
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Fantastic! I've never read anything that is so exciteing, hard nosed and damn funny all at the same time! I really love it and can't wait to read the rest. I really do think you have an excellent career ahead of you
Author's Response: Wow- Thanks! I really do hope I have a writing career ahead of me, but if not, it's nice to know people like my work here. I hope I can keep the action/drama/comedy coming. |
| a world without prawns |
05/30/05 - 01:35AM |
1: Pilot: Goodbye Boston |
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As the 132 people befor me have siad, I LUVED IT!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate the time everyone has taken to give me encouragement. |
| Rougue_Slayer |
05/08/05 - 08:22PM |
9: Episode 9: Departures (from the norm) |
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What would I like to say about this episode? Four words come to mind. OH MY FUCKING GOD! EWWW!!!! But I can deal. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the OMFG, the EWWW!!!!, and the "Keepu up the good work." All three are reactions I'm happy to see. Thanks again for reviewing. |
| Rougue_Slayer |
05/08/05 - 07:26PM |
5: Episode 5: Heartland and Homeland |
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Sad...You make me wanna cry. Meanie. Good job, though.
Author's Response: Sorry you're sad and crying, but I'm glad you thought I did a good job. Even if I'm a meanie. |
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