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Reviews for The Revelation




will elessar 06/30/04 - 10:59PM 1: News Signed
VERY NICELY DONE MY DEAR!! CANN'T WAIT FOR THE OTHER CHAPTERS. ;)

Author's Response: no other chapters, you goober-doober!! :)

inlovewithangel 06/29/04 - 10:35PM 1: News Signed
Interesting story, although it might have been a good plan to take everything a little slower. Create a more suspenseful build up. But excellent possibility! I like it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you! Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
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