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Reviews for Their Baby




terry 07/31/05 - 04:13AM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Cool Story. You should keep going with it. I wonder if Buffy and Angel's secrets (B: the details of her relationship with Spike. A: His relationship with Cordy and Connor's existence) will come out to haunt them. Keep going!

Revello1620 12/03/04 - 10:10AM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
This is a great idea for a story but if you don't mind me offering advice I would flesh out the story until it was fatter. You right like a reporter, you cover the event and get the story across but alot of the details end up on the editing room floor. What you have is good, so don't be afraid to add more to get the readers deeper into the story

Shay 07/24/04 - 08:40PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Hi! I would really like to read more of this! It's interesting to think of Angel and Buffy having a baby! I hope you write more soon, good job! -Marissa

Kellcool 06/29/04 - 06:57AM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I agree with inlovewithangel, u need to make the sentences more fuller as well, get the reader more gripped.

Author's Response: thank you for your reviews ill do just what you suggested thnks

Author's Response: thank you for your reviews ill do just what you suggested thnks

inlovewithangel 06/28/04 - 09:03PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Hmm... I'd like to see how you progress with this. Think about doing seperate paragraphs, though. It makes it simpler to read. Nice work!

Author's Response: thankz ill start separate paragraphs for the next chapter
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