Reviews for A Girl In A New World
| Psyche2 |
01/04/05 - 07:24PM |
1: A Girl In A New World |
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| I loved it! Awesome! Very Awesome! |
| Spikes_Chick |
08/03/04 - 03:35PM |
1: A Girl In A New World |
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Hi taryn I loved the story.I think you put alot of effort into it so i hope you continue writing your storys so i can continue reading them..
Author's Response: thx Kim |
| quiet_corner |
07/23/04 - 11:57AM |
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great story. i thought it was intresting. ^_^ enjoyed it much. :D
Author's Response: thx! I had a dream about it...so i wrote it down! Glad you liked! |
| Angeldove |
07/16/04 - 05:55PM |
1: A Girl In A New World |
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Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I did enjoy the new Bronze scene. I think it is more 'in character' that Xander never accepts it. Nice revision.
Author's Response: thx, i liked it 2! |
| Angeldove |
06/23/04 - 05:11PM |
1: A Girl In A New World |
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Very creative & funny. I was engaged through the first half of the story, but felt that it fell flat and was rushed at the end; and this was mostly due to Buffy's quick turn-around when it came to Spike, and her friends readiness to accept this new development It's a story with amazing potential. I especially loved it when they watched OMWF before it actually occured. Good overall work.
Author's Response: yeh! i was thinking about changing the ending so that Xander is really mad at the Spike thing. But, i actually think that Willow would be okay with it. And i made it so Buffy already had feelings towards Spike but couldn't admit to herself. So Dawn and Jessica helped her with that. But it did seem a bit rushed so i might change the ending.
THX for your review
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