Reviews for Spellbound
| Angellover |
09/24/04 - 10:13PM |
1: Spellbound |
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This was a very interesting way to depict the ending of Surprise. It was worded very poetically and I'm glad that you didn't put there names in there, and instead just used one big paragraph of description. The way that you meld words together is perfection.
Author's Response: This is one of my favorite forms to write in. Writing free-verse like this is my selfish way of purging myself of my own emotions of the moment. Thank you so much for your review. |
| corncobb |
08/31/04 - 12:46PM |
1: Spellbound |
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I liked this, it was very poetic but didn't stray away from the main point of what the characters were feeling. I liked that you kept it vague, it makes it easier for people to relate to the feelings even if they can't relate to the specific situation. Well done
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked the style, and vague but referenced was definitely what I was going for. Thanks for your review. |
| Chelle |
08/11/04 - 05:34AM |
1: Spellbound |
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This was a great metaphor for what she was feeling at the time. The fact that you didnt come out and say "she was scared, she was worred that...." was a very good choice in where to take this fic. You left out names, and situations, so this could be used to convey many different characters, or situations, while at the same time, it perfectly describes Buffy's emotional state. Am I making sense? Hope so ;-)
It was very poetic, and the words seemed carefully chosen and perfect, and the emotion was there in full force. Another wonderful read. :-D
Author's Response: Of course you are making sense. I’m glad you liked this brief exposition, and felt I got it right. And it truly is universal isn’t it? We can all find a part of it that fits into a situation we’ve been in. Thanks for reviewing, you know how much it mean to me. |
| Violet SS |
06/30/04 - 10:18PM |
1: Spellbound |
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| Love the imagery and poetic wording. I'm loathe to put lines from such a short fic into my review, but I really liked this: "she flees from uncertainty to that which she knows." It's beautiful in its melancholy simplicity. There are several others, but I'll leave them to the reader.
One tiny quibble. I think--though I may just have read it wrong--that you mean "sanctuary" where you say "sanctity".
Author's Response: Yes, you were right. Thank you for pointing it out to me. I went in and corrected it. |
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