Reviews for Just The Truth
| Angeldove |
07/29/04 - 07:52PM |
2: Together By Herself |
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| I loved the exposition regarding Buffy's feelings about herself and her relationships. You and I definitely think alike when it comes to this aspect of Buffy. The only thing I was unsure about was how her feelings about Spike were portrayed in this chapter after having read the preceding one. I guess I didn't get a clear sense that she was indeed past her romantic feelings for him…My favorite part: "Sometimes, she would sit at an outdoor cafe, and watch the world turn. Buffy had never been able to do that. She'd always been right in the thick of things, making sure the world kept turning. But she never really got to enjoy it." So truly Buffy. |
| Violet SS |
06/18/04 - 07:29PM |
2: Together By Herself |
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| I don't usually read these reflective fics, but I think you have done a really nice job with Buffy. I especially loved the following: "Buffy wondered if the reason she had never gotten her head around history while she was in school was because history was meant to be shown, not taught.
Sometimes, she would sit at an outdoor cafe, and watch the world turn. Buffy had never been able to do that. She'd always been right in the thick of things, making sure the world kept turning. But she never really got to enjoy it." Nice turns of phrases.
and thanks for the comments on Legalese!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. I don't usually read reflective fics either, but I kind of needed this one, just so everyone can understand the character in a more complete way. Don't worry, next chapter will be action. |
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