Reviews for Just The Truth
| michebabyblue |
01/09/06 - 03:35PM |
1: A Push From A Sister |
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| Why have u left this un done i want to find out how this ends its soo good u are one of my favourite authors |
| Angeldove |
07/29/04 - 07:42PM |
1: A Push From A Sister |
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| First I want to say, and I am trying to put this in a way that doesn't sound like a criticism wrapped in a compliment…but I didn't know you had this in you. This story is wonderful and true to the buffyverse and each characterization thus far. I have read some of your other stuff and enjoyed it, but what I've read in the past were for the most part short fics that dealt with a small specified moment of time and theme. This is not bad, I enjoyed them. But now reading this and knowing you can write longer more devolved, integrated character pieces, will lead me to read some of your past work I have just come into contact with. It's a talented person who can write both effectively.
You're use of flashbacks was done well. Most authors have trouble using this technique without confusing the reader. My favorite part: 'Seventy-six trombones pet' I got chills when he said it. I probably wouldn't have explained it through Buffy's flashback exposition, only 'cause I love the inside reference and figure if you don't get it…well then it's your (the reader's) loss (I'm so mean). But it definitely is an author's call, and doesn't ruin the moment.
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| Violet SS |
06/12/04 - 11:05PM |
1: A Push From A Sister |
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Lovely. A B/A fic that understands and respects the B/S dynamic. I especially liked the sister interaction.
Author's Response: Thank you, Violet. I love the new chapter of Legalease, by the way. :-) |
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