Reviews for My inner child
| happie17 |
06/27/04 - 06:38AM |
1: Hell's mouth, heavens eye's |
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| lovin' it! |
| bigdaddie |
06/26/04 - 09:54AM |
1: Hell's mouth, heavens eye's |
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| This needs a good rating. |
| bigdaddie |
06/26/04 - 09:52AM |
1: Hell's mouth, heavens eye's |
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| This is one cool story!!!!!!!! |
| Angeldove |
06/23/04 - 12:58AM |
1: Hell's mouth, heavens eye's |
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| The story is extremely creative, quite imaginative. I didn't however feel connected with the characters, therefore never got the feeling that I experienced new insight into their natures. It is ok for characters to speak and act in unexpected ways, different from the strict buffyverse mythology, but it has to be backed up. I would also suggest spending time polishing dialogue to ensure that each character's true voice is heard. It has definite potential. |
| Dookie |
06/15/04 - 10:29AM |
1: Hell's mouth, heavens eye's |
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| I think that this is going to be the start of a brilliant story. I applaud you and your apparent creativity. |
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