Reviews for Why now? Why this
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/21/06 - 12:38PM |
7: Difficult Decisions, Different Demons |
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| Well wasn't that chapter full of suprises! Great chapter, can't wait to read what happens next! |
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/21/06 - 12:33PM |
2: How Could You? |
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| Aww, that was good. Buffy and Angel make such a great couple. |
| FaithInTheSupernatural |
07/21/06 - 12:31PM |
1: The End Is The Beginning |
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| This is really good so far. The characters are really well written and this gives a very good idea of what might have happened. I love it, I can't wait to read the rest. |
| BelovedSlayer |
07/20/06 - 03:25PM |
1: The End Is The Beginning |
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Even though the last chapter lacked any kind of action i actually enjoyed reading the basic information on Cassandra. its very very interesting and informative and i have to ask is Buffy gonna have the chance to come face to face with her anytime soon? i could only hope so. please update soon and you're doing a great job so far
Author's Response: well, you never know keep reading and you'll see :) thanx for the encouragement! |
| twinblade |
03/27/06 - 08:23AM |
8: what can one do that the other cant? |
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I find this story a bit confusing in areas but your style is good. Is it supposed to be a round-robin?
Author's Response: thanx i wil try to simplfy it without losing the style. nah i accidently left the round robin thing on and i havent found a way to take it off |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/20/05 - 02:48PM |
1: The End Is The Beginning |
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i read this fic a loooonggg time ago but i forgot eventually to leave a review. i really really love it and im happy that Buffy and Angel made some amends concerning each other and what they had. im really glad that Doyle is alive and human once more. it be good that he can help the Slayers and Angel once again. i love this fic. im gonna add this to my faves so please you gotta update asap!!!!
Author's Response: thanx for reviewing, i always welcome them. i luv giving readers the chance to read what the screen didnt show. i will try and update soon, have a bit of writers block at the mo...but it will be continued |
| filmtheory |
01/15/05 - 02:35AM |
3: Unexpected Meetings |
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Another good chapter. You're definitely developing many layers of tension. I like the whole interaction between The Scoobies and the Angel Inv. team. Like so many others, I would have LOVED to see Buffy learn about Connor. Thanks for giving us that. Oh, and by the way, love your screenname (ravenclaw).
Author's Response: hey filmtheory....thanx i built on what u said before bout building up the tension....hope i achieved that for the readers. i always wanted to do somehting where buffy found out bout connor...since it was never done on screen. thanx it took me ages to think of something original. a new chapter will be is in the making and will beable for reading soon..... |
| filmtheory |
08/31/04 - 11:10PM |
1: The End Is The Beginning |
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Your first fanfic is a good one. You have a pretty solid grasp of the characters, which makes for a nice read. If you were interested in anything in the advice area, I’d say follow through with your conflict. Most interesting stories are about conflict, physical, emotional, or whatever. You’re excellent at setting up tension, particularly emotional tension. You can definitely milk that tension for much more arguing and conflict. But this was an excellent story.
Author's Response: thank you very much for reviewing. i am very grateful to hear advice on how to make my story even better for the readers, in the next part i'll definetly milk the tension....once again thank you very much. |
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