Reviews for Cookie
| inlovewithangel |
02/29/04 - 11:43AM |
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It's sweet, it's going well, and I hope you continue it. Starrynight is correct in that maybe you should have had a bit more of a build up to Angel and Buffy getting together, but I'm interested in where you take the story from here. If you want a few suggestions on where to go, I'd be happy to help you out (and would appreciate a few suggestions on my stories too.) So, keep writing, leave me a review or email me at souledvamp_and_bestslayer@yahoo.com Please, continue it!
Author's Response: Please! Help me! I'd love some new ideas, and could definately redo this story with your suggestions and help. Email me and we'll talk. Thanks! |
| Starrynight26 |
02/29/04 - 04:52AM |
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I thought that the story had a promising start... but I think (and this is just my opinion) that stories are so much better when they have more of a lead in. Like, maybe Angel could have been sitting there for a while just thinking... I don't know. Sometimes instant gratification isn't the best way to go... it's always so much less discriptive that way, and then the story is over before you even got started. Otherwise... some of it was a little repititious. What I thought was good was the fact that you seemed to have an okay grip on the characters. Over all - you show promise.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feed back. I'm alway's looking to improve and it means alot to me that you took the time to help. Thanks Agian! |
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