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Reviews for Love Isn't A Fairytale




Angel1919 03/03/04 - 12:48AM 2: The First Step Signed
I love it! When is the next chapter going to be posted? Tomorrow, right? Please say tomorrow!!

ShawThang 01/12/04 - 10:46PM 1: Realization Signed
Hey, thank you for your wonderful reviews. The reason I write is to make someone's day a little bit better, and hopefully I've achieved that. First off, I'm an all round shipper, but I do enjoy the odd B/A fic, which is why I've written two. This one was a pleasure to read. I've got some pointers for you though, so hopefully they help. One, you wrote "night in shining armor" when it's really spelt "knight". Watch those tricky spelling mistakes, because even I do the same thing. Secondly, although your writing flowed really well, you need to calm down and take your time. You don't need to lay the whole story down in one chapter. You could have had the first chapter stating why Buffy was upset about love, and then maybe have Buffy question whether she should visit Angel to build up suspense. All in all a great story!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! "Night"! Such a typically me thing to do. You're right though, about the chapters, thanks. I just get so wrapped up in the story, I forget that people are actually going to read it and want it presented in a certain way. Thanks though, you're a great writer, and as far as I can tell, a sweet person. My email is perfectrena@yahoo.com in case you ever want to chat.






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