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Guinevere 02/24/06 - 11:49AM 8: Epilogue Signed
Well, the story managed to grab me, even though you've chosen a pretty difficult format. I can't help but think that the story would flow better if the first person POV would be in present tense. Also, a little beta-ing would help. Either way, I like your OC's, they seem to have their own personality which is rare in fanfiction! Nicely done!
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