Reviews for Getting On With Life
| slayerfest |
08/12/05 - 02:38AM |
1: Getting On With Life |
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| Hmm. I'm not sure what to tell you.
The beginning is strong. Well thought out. Well described. After the first set of stars, though... well, you seem to be the opposite of me; you pass by the details skillfully, whereas I have to go over every single one. The lack of detail, I think, works strongly to your advantage. But even so, I can see the effort, just not the result of the effort.
The first person point of view is different. It's well-done. I think I can say that this story is generally good.
However... vamps have to be invited in. ;) |
| SpikeandAngelsgurl |
12/10/03 - 07:39PM |
1: Getting On With Life |
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| It's really good. You should write a sequel. |
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