Reviews for LA angels
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
08/06/06 - 01:21PM |
1: Issue of Class |
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| This is such a cute story so far! The title caught my attention. Can't wait to read more soon! |
| haras |
08/01/06 - 08:35PM |
5: Wolfram & Hart |
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i love the idear of this story and cant wait to read more keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story and promise that more will come soon. |
| slayerfest |
07/29/06 - 01:06AM |
4: Shoptalk |
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The premise caught my attention immediately. It's a good plotline, but I suggest that you proofread it or have someone else proofread it just for grammar and sentence structure. You've got a good start here; I did read the four chapters you have posted, so it is an interesting fic, but try to pace it a bit more. It seems rushed. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Glad you like the begin of my fic as it is the first i've written and appreciate the construction criticism.
As for my bad grammer I can only apologise. |
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