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Reviews for The Open Door




always angel 07/29/06 - 02:06AM 1: Prologue Signed
This is beautifuly written. I agree with Sinister, your descriptions made me feel like I was actually there. Great job! I know I'm gonna enjoy this fic.

Author's Response: Thank you as always for the awesome review always angel i appreciate them so much. As i mention in the first chapter i'm planning on writing this just like if i was writing a novel or something so i wanted to make sure the surroundings were descriptive just like if you were actually there i have to admit i think i'm gonna enjoy writing this because this might be my first very long fic. another chapter will be posted ASAP thanks for the review!

Sinister 07/27/06 - 07:20PM 1: Prologue Signed
Very interesting start. Your discriptions were great. Reading this made me feel like I was there. I'm interested to see where your going to take this. I do have one complaint though. The format is a little weird and makes it hard to fallow. I'm not sure if you meant for it to be like that or not but it just makes things a little confusing. Other then that it looks good. Can't wait to see what comes next. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read the first chapter. i'm so sorry that it might sound somewhat confusing but i was in a hurry to post this so that's why it sounds the way it is. i'm trying to put everything together. The plot, the characters, and the surroundings so it won't sound so rushed or confusing whichever. i will post the second chater up very soon. Thanks for the review
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