Reviews for Jonathan's Short-Comings
| slayerfest |
07/22/06 - 05:28PM |
1: Confidence Bestowed |
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The exchange between Jonathan and Andrew was pretty much right on the money. Jonathan talking to the coach or whoever else was a little shaky but still entirely believable.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll work on it! |
| slayerfest |
07/22/06 - 02:06AM |
2: Chapter 2 - Swim Teams and Star Wars |
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Nice. Well-written and amusing. Jonathan's a hard guy to write for. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it would be fun; I'm still working out the plot. Question for Slayerfest or anyone reading the reviews who would like to review *cough*. How is the dialogue? I'm not sure if it's really... Characteristic to the characters... |
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