Reviews for Unexpected Visitor
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08/08/06 - 03:18AM |
6: Le's go! |
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It is an interesting premise but it's all very rushed and seems to be mostly compiled of dialogue. It'd be cool if you could throw in a bit of detail. Other than that, I am very intrigued. I like the reference to Anya's fear of rabbits. I'll wait for the update. :)
Author's Response: I'll do that. This is like my first fic so I'm still gettin the hang of things :)
Anyway, thatnks for the review! :)
Author's Response: P.S I really like your Zelda story. I can't wait till you update that! |
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