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frenchtoast101 07/09/06 - 05:54PM 5: chapter 4 Signed
Hey, i just finished reading what you have posted of the fic, and I wanted to give you some advice. You should really proofread your chapters before you post them. Do you have Microsoft Word? Cuz that has a spell check on it. If not, I'm sure you could find a free spell checker on google. And i have a question: What was with that whole Buffy and Rachel thing? Are they like..a couple? Cuz, that sort of confused me...but please don't take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism and I hope to read more from you soon. =]]

Author's Response: rachel and buffy are not toegther but are best friends have sex. thanks for the advice.

Stakemenow 07/06/06 - 05:41PM 3: chapter 2 Signed
you need to edit the hell out of this!!

Author's Response: ok cool i'll do that

butterflykisses_xx 07/06/06 - 12:56PM 2: new place, new friends Signed
Hey there my dear; for your first 'fic it's really cute. But I have a few suggestions that you could possibly keep in mind; re-read your story before you post it on the thing just so you can pick up any errors that you didn't notice as you were typing, and maybe make them a bit longer? you'll intice more readers that way, and you'll probably gain more ideas as you write them. All-in-all, good job sweetie, and I hope you take my ideas into consideration.

Author's Response: thanks for the ideas. i get the the ideas and there longer but as sonn as i go to write they won't come so trying do this one

slayerfest 07/05/06 - 06:44PM 2: new place, new friends Signed
This needs to be proofread above other things. The plot is interesting; I know it's AU but I think you should try to write the characters as they appear on the show. I mean, that's the whole point of posting here, isn't it? Buffy just seems a little too angry about everything.

I'm sorry if this comment seems mean, but I'm just voicing my opinion. You have the potential to be a great writer and I'll definitely be waiting for updates and other stories from you. :)

Author's Response: hi slayerfeast buffy not as angry she been let down by a lot of people and hurt its too in the story you'll see what i mean when i write more and thank you. buffy4angel







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