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slayerfest 07/04/06 - 06:49PM 1: Stuck Signed
It is interesting, but you might want to pace it a little better and format it into smaller paragraphs. It's hard to keep track of the dialogue this way. Keep going, though... it's a very interesting idea!

MonsieurRipper 07/04/06 - 06:22PM 1: Stuck Signed
Not a bad idea. I can't wait to see where it goes. Although I failed to see how the young girl was talking to Angel like a daughter would. It seemed like Angel just sorta happened to jump to the right conclusion after an 8 second confrontation. Good start
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