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BelovedSlayer 06/18/06 - 12:47AM 3: Going mad. Signed
this is a good fic. the only thing wrong with it is that the chapters should be more lengthy cause i kinda don't like super short chapters but other than that i enjoyed reading the first three chapters. the only thing is Buffy should have some sense knocked into her. i know she's now one of the undead but is the scooby gang gonna find out she's alive? update soon and be careful with the spelling errors and such

Author's Response: hi, thanks, and I'll try to make the next chapter longer, and the scooby gang do know she is a vampire, if you read the second chapter, Giles I think say something like i don't want Joyce to see her, not yet, then he's talking about how he doesn't want Joyce to see vampire Buffy, I know, it's cryptic, and i'll try to watch those spelling errors, I'd go a whole lot better if I had a betta reader or whatever you call it, do you know where I could find one ?
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