Reviews for Blessing, to a Cruse.
| BelovedSlayer |
06/16/06 - 06:35PM |
4: Step Mother. |
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ok i read the last three chapters and their awesome but at the same time its kinda unrealistic that alot of the characters have to hide their real feelings by beating the crap out of each other constantly and by saying fuck this or fuck that just too many times for my count. But if you're just starting writing fan fics, you will write better and keep an eye on alot of the spelling and grammar mistakes you fic has as i mentioned before. Please don't take the criticism personally. i only hope that it will help you become a better writer in time. But other than that, im looking forward to reading the next chapter
Author's Response: First I misspelled those words on purpose, cause that's how I roll Ha ha! As far as crusing Alley's the only one that really does. What can I say, she's white trash. I'm trying to make hher as unlikeable as I can, and then later see if I can get people to like her. It's weird I know. A lot of her problems are her fault, because of her temper. She's not a hero. But maybe she can learn to be |
| dutchgirl |
06/03/06 - 12:57AM |
4: Step Mother. |
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| Great new chapter, it's well written. Things are moving forward in a great direction wich I think i'm going to like very much! Keep it up, please!! : ) |
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