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MonsieurRipper 07/16/06 - 02:23AM 3: The Offer Signed
V. Good! I've only just got around to reading this story now. I think this is a very original idea that is well played out. Although you have slight habit of mixing tenses. (past, current and whatnot.) Other than that, fabulous!

twinblade 06/01/06 - 07:10AM 15: Natasha Signed
I just sat and read all 15 chapters and I got to tell you I love this story. Being ex-Army myself I can keep up with what is being said and your descriptions. I enjoyed the Highlander reference and I like your created characters. You are doing an amazing job with Dawn (I hope I do as well in my story "Locke and Key"), and you write the rest of the Scoobies & Scrappies extremely well too. But of course I must ask, will we see more of Xander as the story progresses?

Author's Response: twinblade- Thank you! So, very much for taking the time to read my story. It is extremely gratifying to have another Solider read it, your the first. Thank you for all of your highly motivating comments!!! Yes, Xander will be working closely with the SGM to re-hash Xander's military experience acquired early in the show. I'm placing you in my favorites and will be reading your story in turn. Thanks again!!! -Raptor

MonsieurRipper 05/29/06 - 08:14PM 1: That's Our Girl Signed
You write very well. Very discriptive and well done imagery. Althought at times, the amount of imagery and titled movements can take away from the suspense and action feel. But props, you are so much better at writing than I.
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