Reviews for The Horror Of It All: Welcome To The Slaughterhouse
| Raven |
06/01/06 - 08:24PM |
6: Squeal Like A Pig |
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YES, THIS STORY WAS CRULE! I mean this is so much worse than kids going hungry, or child abuse, it's a violent story! It was too evil, and you didn't give any warring. (Well, except for the thing at the beging about people dying horribly, but that could mean anything) I mean with a name like Slaughterhouse, I asumed it was about puppies, eating ice cream! Boy, was I surpried! IT'S EVIL! YOUR EVIL! Please update soon.
Author's Response: "Puppies eating ice cream" - haha. I like that. Thanks! |
| goolcap |
05/29/06 - 01:18PM |
6: Squeal Like A Pig |
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I really hated this. I never understand why people write fic like this, especially as they must really like the series to write it? why are folks so cruel to the characters we all love?
still, always a way back...
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The Doctor watched the Monk’s body begin to disintegrate as the time paradox he had created ate away at the very fibre of his being. “You broke the laws of time” he repeated once more. He gestured to the Scooby gang who stood around him, restored by his shattering of the timeline created by the rogue Timelord’s interference. “Your intervention was meant to destroy them…”
“WHOSE LAWS!?” the Monk screamed. “GALLIFREY IS GONE! THE TIMELORDS ARE GONE!” He continued more imploringly. “There’s only you and me left”
The Doctor shook his head. “ No. There’s only me” He looked on sadly as the Monk faded to nothingness. He was the last of his kind now.
How awful, to be the last.
He turned and walked back to the Tardis.
Giles gestured to the Monk’s Tardis. “Ah, what about…?”
“Stick it on the rubbish heap” the Doctor suggested. “Time Lords are linked to their Tardis at a psychic level. It died with him” He laid an affectionate hand on the battered exterior of his own blue police box. At least he could always go home.
And what made it a home was sharing it with good company.
“Anyone fancy a trip?” he asked the Scoobies opening the door.
They almost knocked him over on the way in.
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Author's Response: Gee. Thanks. |
| axel |
05/29/06 - 11:21AM |
6: Squeal Like A Pig |
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You have a strange idea for even odd. Well, I guess that's it. No more powerful people *And don't say Tara, because she was never powerful, and we all know it). It's just Giles, and......... NO, you not going to do that, are you. Come on, even Joss knew that wouldn't work!
Author's Response: Come on. Did they need superpowers to beat Leatherface in the original? Though I suppose... hmmm... we'll see. Thanks! |
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