Reviews for The Coming of Lilith
| Korina Stone |
08/24/03 - 02:51PM |
6: Part Six |
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| Liked it very much. Nice idea for the storyline, but it is too short.
Why not more mindgames, cat and mouse between Lilth and Angel. Or maybe Lilth had could want him as her eternal mate and he gives in for little time as buffy had told him she didn't love him anymore or because cordy had sleept with his son connor.... or something along this lines. As the mate of the first vampire and drinking her blood... he would gain more power.
really, really liked it. but as i said it to short. how about a sequel. I mean Angel/us had killed the dark mother. what happend to her powers. are they now angels. he was the only other vampire in the room undead and not a pile of ashes.
who is going to hunt him down. he now should count as the most powerfull vampire of all times. i mean he killed the dark mother.
you see, you really should write more to this. Maybe Lilth search
for angel, which he thought of as legend would too make a good storie.
I love it, if it Angel, who is the hero at the end of the storie and not buffy. i love her but she is getting to much credit and he is such a more interessing character.
thx for this too short but great storie. |
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