Reviews for Angel Season 5 (Redux)
| Adjovi |
07/12/06 - 03:05PM |
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I really liked this chapter--loved the conversation w/ Angel and Connor and how Angel just keeps digging his hole deeper and deeper. Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yep, Angel is just shoveling away. If this whole deal ever goes south, he’s in trouble. I should go. I’ve said too much. :P |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
06/14/06 - 07:33PM |
13: 5.13: This is the Plan |
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Aww! Poor Connor, his entire world is crumbling around him.
So Eve's still working with the evil ppl, huh? And Connor knows. This is gonna end up bad...
I always liked Cordy a bit more b4 she became Mrs High and Mighty. I'm a bit confused as to what's going on with Gwen for some reason...
I noticed how Angel didn't tell Connor the entire truth - more lies that'll come back and eventually bite him in the ass. I think it would work better if Connor were to find out the entire truth by himself.
Overall, I liked this chapter - and I only found one (what I think is a) typo: "For their soles." souls.
SS4EVA
Author's Response: Yep, poor Connor is getting put through the ringer again. Of course the relationship between Connor and Eve is going to end up badly. How else could it end?! Gwen is a working girl who’s working for a living. That’s pretty much all that’s up with her. As for Angel’s lies, they’re *definitely* going to come back and chomp him on the butt. Thanks for reading and for reviewing. |
| axel |
05/30/06 - 07:42PM |
13: 5.13: This is the Plan |
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Poor Connor. It's just going to get worse. And it looks like Gunn's evil. to bad, I always liked him. And why is he only Black member of Angel bad, in this. What's up with that? (I'm kidding) Anyway good chapter.
Author's Response: Poor everyone! But yes, it will be getting worse for Connor. I always liked Gunn, too. But when they took him to the white room at the end of season 4, I couldn’t help thinking, “wouldn’t it be so awesome if W&H controlled Gunn next year?” If you’re fearing a poor representation of Africa Americans in my story, I’ll try to bring back Jasmine and Mr. Trick as good guys. Or maybe not. |
| Vamp19762000 |
05/27/06 - 12:09AM |
13: 5.13: This is the Plan |
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This is a really good chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I hope you like it as much as you liked this one. |
| BloodThirstyGoddess |
05/21/06 - 11:55AM |
13: 5.13: This is the Plan |
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that was honestly one of my favorite chapters! i love how Angel and Connor were talking and I can't wait for the turnout of the memory spell, weather they preform it or not! great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I hoe to keep the suspense running re: the memory spell. I'm glad you liked the Angel/ Connor scene. Thanks again! |
| dutchgirl |
05/21/06 - 08:25AM |
13: 5.13: This is the Plan |
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And here I was cheering on Wes and Cordy & co to get rid of the memory spell as fast as possible, and then you just had to write the ending scene, did you?! : )
Loving the Connor and Eve relationship, wondering what will happen after the memory spell breaks, if it breaks that is!!
One thing I do know for sure is that I don´t wanna meet the boy in the white room ever!!!! Looking forward to find out what will happen next!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad the Angel/ Connor seen was somewhat poignant. I'm also gald you're feeling conflicted. I live for that. Well, actually, I live for reviews, so thanks again! |
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